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Will you appear
your distant from me it hurts so bad
you haven't shown up it makes me mad
it tears at my youth it kills me inside
when will we be as one when shall we together
be side by side
this distance is annoying
when will you appear
on that day the skies be clear
your taking forever your taking too long
now it is hurting now everything is wrong.
you haven't shown up it makes me mad
it tears at my youth it kills me inside
when will we be as one when shall we together
be side by side
this distance is annoying
when will you appear
on that day the skies be clear
your taking forever your taking too long
now it is hurting now everything is wrong.
Published 5th Dec 2011
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5th Dec 2011 10:33pm
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Anonymous
31st Mar 2012 1:49am
spelling error...your DISTANCE from me
I do not like to give negative criticism
but this is for your own good
Your spelling and grammar need a lot of work
This poem is appealing...but you could do better
If this was about gay love...I missed it
Write more and write on
I do not like to give negative criticism
but this is for your own good
Your spelling and grammar need a lot of work
This poem is appealing...but you could do better
If this was about gay love...I missed it
Write more and write on
