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Effulgent Dalliance
Come play with me in my sandbox
We’ll get out the pails and shovels
Play make-believe and laugh a lot
Spaceship it to other galaxies
Just You, Em, me and the stars
Can I tempt You with candy bars
soapy bubbles…….bubblegum?
Or we can pretend we’re married
You’ll want to say You love me
You know I am not hurried
taking everything in stride, slow
no matter what I love You the same
and I know You know
Come play with me anew
I’ll stroke Your skin and tickle
Let me come close; let me come in
Can I tempt You with my pickle?
Ah hah! I think I see a smile!
Published 19th May 2019
Author's Note
Thank You, Em for the video date on Saturday. I had a lot of fun.
Looking forward to the next date.
Looking forward to the next date.
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Anonymous
19th May 2019 9:14am
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19th May 2019 2:06pm
19th May 2019 9:47am
A very sweet evocation, Tallen. The pickle part reminded me of Little Rascal's 'Nickel for a pickle'!
19th May 2019 2:05pm
I loved watching the Lil' Rascals!!
Froggy was my favorite character -- his voice was precious!!
Froggy was my favorite character -- his voice was precious!!
Anonymous
19th May 2019 12:38pm
Very well written, Tallen. You nailed the perspective of child's play, the humor is well timed and the rhymes are delightful.
19th May 2019 2:07pm
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19th May 2019 9:53pm
watching love unfold brings happiness back into what was a depressing Underground. I'm depending on you two to keep me afloat with sappy & silly shit. This was precious! About that date.👀
Anonymous
19th May 2019 10:00pm
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19th May 2019 10:04pm
19th May 2019 10:05pm
My muse brings out the mushiness in me
and Yeah, i get mighty silly sometimes.
I think it's OK for love between lovers to be silly
and giggling and mushy. It keeps the goose-bumps and warm electrical fuzzies and butterflies going.
Thank You for the wonderful comments.
Em and me will do our best to keep this place
sappy and silly.
; ) <3
and Yeah, i get mighty silly sometimes.
I think it's OK for love between lovers to be silly
and giggling and mushy. It keeps the goose-bumps and warm electrical fuzzies and butterflies going.
Thank You for the wonderful comments.
Em and me will do our best to keep this place
sappy and silly.
; ) <3
19th May 2019 10:21pm
Absolutely! Silliness is so very important between lovers... I love it & don't know what I'd do without it myself. Keep it alive;)
21st May 2019 10:18pm
This is lovely and playful, as all loving relationships should be. You both bring joy to the site.
21st May 2019 10:29pm
23rd May 2019 8:27pm
Great ink Tallen! I can tell the fun and the excitement in this piece... it keeps you young *hi5*
23rd May 2019 8:30pm
Spills like this one
agree
helps with the youthful mindset
thank You for the read and kind share
agree
helps with the youthful mindset
thank You for the read and kind share
