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Twinkles
(simper)
O my Darling
(sometimes) I’m wild
The more I love You
The more You smile. . .
Help me Em
(Please) Help me
To love You more!
When You’re near me
and feelin’ blue
I am glad it’s me
who comforts You
O my Darling
(sometimes) I’m mild
The more I love You
The more You smile. . .
Help me Em
(Please) Help me
To love You more!
When I’m near You
Feelin’ fine
Love Your laughter
Know You’re mine
O my Beautiful
(sometimes) I’m a child
The more I love You
The more You smile. . .
Help me Em
(Please) Help me
To love You more………
O my Darling
(sometimes) I’m wild
The more I love You
The more You smile. . .
Help me Em
(Please) Help me
To love You more!
When You’re near me
and feelin’ blue
I am glad it’s me
who comforts You
O my Darling
(sometimes) I’m mild
The more I love You
The more You smile. . .
Help me Em
(Please) Help me
To love You more!
When I’m near You
Feelin’ fine
Love Your laughter
Know You’re mine
O my Beautiful
(sometimes) I’m a child
The more I love You
The more You smile. . .
Help me Em
(Please) Help me
To love You more………
Author's Note
Sky_dancer
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h9ZGKALMMuc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h9ZGKALMMuc
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Re. Twinkles
Anonymous
16th May 2019 7:24am
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16th May 2019 2:36pm
Oooooooooooo!!!
You found the red dressed Dancer!!
You are sooooooo Beautiful, Em!!
thank You, Lover
You found the red dressed Dancer!!
You are sooooooo Beautiful, Em!!
thank You, Lover
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16th May 2019 4:20pm
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16th May 2019 4:58pm
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
16th May 2019 12:25pm
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16th May 2019 2:39pm
There is soooooooooo much more romance in me still that she has not seen or experienced!
IRL i can be almost too romantic (Em doesn't believe that's such a thing - lol)
thank You for causing me to smile
Rockin'!!!
IRL i can be almost too romantic (Em doesn't believe that's such a thing - lol)
thank You for causing me to smile
Rockin'!!!
Re. Twinkles
16th May 2019 12:48pm
It's so lyrical and genuine. Would love to hear it to music, Tallen. It's a melody she'll always carry in her heart.
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Funny You should mention lyrical
because several days ago i shared one stanza with Em in Hangouts (so when she woke up she'd be smiling)
and i thought it was done but put it into the drafts section here in DU but didn't post right away.
Then a couple of nights later i dreamed the rest of the spill in a tune (not sure where i'd heard the tune before or from what song it is) and added the rest and then posted.
I think i might sing it to her the next time we are video chatting.
thank You for the kind comments
because several days ago i shared one stanza with Em in Hangouts (so when she woke up she'd be smiling)
and i thought it was done but put it into the drafts section here in DU but didn't post right away.
Then a couple of nights later i dreamed the rest of the spill in a tune (not sure where i'd heard the tune before or from what song it is) and added the rest and then posted.
I think i might sing it to her the next time we are video chatting.
thank You for the kind comments
Re. Twinkles
16th May 2019 4:56pm
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16th May 2019 5:03pm
Re. Twinkles
16th May 2019 5:01pm
dearest Tallen your heart is so beautiful in love
this is so lovingly tender...
love Brenda ❤
this is so lovingly tender...
love Brenda ❤
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16th May 2019 5:05pm
Re. Twinkles
16th May 2019 5:06pm
This made me smile T, but I misread the title and thought Twinkies lol...now I want one
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16th May 2019 5:15pm
ahahahahahaha!!!
thank You for causing me to laugh
Can You even find those indestructible
yellow delights anymore?
thank You for causing me to laugh
Can You even find those indestructible
yellow delights anymore?
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16th May 2019 5:24pm
Re. Twinkles
Anonymous
16th May 2019 7:04pm
A love that keeps growing...that's a beautiful thing right there. :-)
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16th May 2019 7:09pm
Twinkles
17th May 2019 00:47am
The moment I read this, Tallen, I was convinced it should (or was intended to) be a song with verse and chorus. Wonderful lyricism. Man, I think you know just how to "lyrics" her!
Your heart is in the right place and your words simply follow your heartbeat.
Sincerely
cab
Your heart is in the right place and your words simply follow your heartbeat.
Sincerely
cab
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Re: Twinkles
17th May 2019 1:07am
Delighted You shared this with me
as You know what it's like
the spilling words to someone You love
and often there's a melody in our hearts
as You know what it's like
the spilling words to someone You love
and often there's a melody in our hearts
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29th Oct 2019 8:59pm