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HARD LABOR
Wow!
Look at him go!
So fiercely rubbing.
Don't think he knows I'm watching.
This is a genuine turn on.
MMMMMMMM!
Wish he'd do this every day.
He's working up quite a sweat.
Damn this is HOT!
I'm gonna sneak up behind him
grab him 'roun the waist.
Ahhhhhh!
(white froth splatters on the tile)
(laughing) "I'm sorry sweetie did I startle you?"
(my hot breath whispering in his ear)
"Thanks for doing the dishes!"
"You're welcome"
"When you're finished, can you come upstairs...
help me make the bed?"
"I thought you did that this morning."
"I did...but soon it will need remaking...
we may need to change the sheets."
Look at him go!
So fiercely rubbing.
Don't think he knows I'm watching.
This is a genuine turn on.
MMMMMMMM!
Wish he'd do this every day.
He's working up quite a sweat.
Damn this is HOT!
I'm gonna sneak up behind him
grab him 'roun the waist.
Ahhhhhh!
(white froth splatters on the tile)
(laughing) "I'm sorry sweetie did I startle you?"
(my hot breath whispering in his ear)
"Thanks for doing the dishes!"
"You're welcome"
"When you're finished, can you come upstairs...
help me make the bed?"
"I thought you did that this morning."
"I did...but soon it will need remaking...
we may need to change the sheets."
Author's Note
I had a therapist tell me that a man washing dishes was a real turn on for women.
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LOL, nicely done, good thinking on the Author's Note. (if you catch my drift). *smiles and winks*.
I enjoy doing the dishes, and that ambush goes both ways! haha.
I enjoy doing the dishes, and that ambush goes both ways! haha.
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15th May 2019 6:43pm
That would indeed be a welcome ambush either way. Damn, I meant to write "maid." Ha ha...nah, you're correct and I will change it to "may." Thanks for catching that...you see I was typing with a sponge in my hand :D
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15th May 2019 5:59pm
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15th May 2019 6:46pm
Thank you SC! That would be a more compelling name for a guys "honey do" list. :)
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15th May 2019 6:03pm
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15th May 2019 6:48pm
Yeah, a truly hard life :) I am happy and honored you stopped by Sir Buck! I appreciate the read and comment.
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15th May 2019 6:45pm
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15th May 2019 6:52pm
Thank you, Ahavati! That you spent some of your valuable time to read my piece is much appreciated. I am glad you like the perspective...I find it helps alleviate the tedium of any task to make it a sensual affair. The "forbidden chore" if you will :D
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15th May 2019 6:50pm
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15th May 2019 7:34pm
Thank you, Omega! You have proven the dish washing/turn-on (bothered) hypothesis. Now I just need to experiment :) I am glad you enjoy the piece.
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15th May 2019 10:38pm
Dishwashing by hand while she dries can make a bonding moment. (Can be even more of a turn on when done naked!)
Like the saucy invitation in the concluding lines:
"When you're finished, can you come upstairs...
help me make the bed?"
"I thought you did that this morning."
"I did...but soon it will need remaking...
we may need to change the sheets."
Like the saucy invitation in the concluding lines:
"When you're finished, can you come upstairs...
help me make the bed?"
"I thought you did that this morning."
"I did...but soon it will need remaking...
we may need to change the sheets."
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17th May 2019 3:19pm
Hmmm ... a man doing chores ... in a French maid's outfit ... in chains ... I'm coming around to the idea of this ... great write GW ...
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17th May 2019 3:25pm
Thank you, Soledad! Your comment gave me a shocking southward tingle.
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17th May 2019 3:32pm
Guess I shouldn't even mention ... the long ... furry ... butt plug ... tail ... *giggles* ...
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17th May 2019 4:23pm
DAMN! Follows with a supernova of titillation 💣💥 Just not fair in an office setting 😬👅 well 🙏 anyway 😀💘
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Anonymous
18th May 2019 7:50pm
Bob, mon ami... no one cleans the house like a man hoping to get laid 😉
*clutching my pearls & fanning myself*
mon dieu, a man in yellow rubber gloves
this was an utterly clever write
x
*clutching my pearls & fanning myself*
mon dieu, a man in yellow rubber gloves
this was an utterly clever write
x
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Katja, between yours and LDF's fashion tips, I like my chances 😉. Do did I fool you...or did you suspect early the story? We really need to join pens again 😁 or you can be the pen and me the well or vice versa...or both depends on your appetite, refined erotic palate
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Anonymous
19th May 2019 7:34am
i was utterly rapt and wrapped up in the story, didn't see the twist coming at all ltm
ohhhhhh yes, please, we absolutely must. bring your pen x i have ideas brewing already
ohhhhhh yes, please, we absolutely must. bring your pen x i have ideas brewing already
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24th May 2019 6:50pm
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24th May 2019 6:55pm