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Heaven & Hell
Heaven & Hell
One red and one blue
Wings of an angel
twisted together with barbed wire
A halo and a horn
connected by a cross
Symbolizes you, symbolizes us
I see torn pieces of you
some jagged, some smooth
and fitting together perfectly
to form perfection
Perfection
in the eye of the beholder - me
The angel - you
You can be my heaven
and I will be your hell
One cannot exist without the other
I will lead you into temptation
Corrupt you with my lust
Tear your heart from your chest
it will always be mine...
Once you have loved me
you will never love another...
Burn my name into your soul
Your pain will be my pleasure
You, my angel
cradle me in your soft blue wings
Love me tenderly then
rock me gently to sleep
For tomorrow is another day
Then I will be your heaven and
you can be my hell
Lead me into temptation...
One red and one blue
Wings of an angel
twisted together with barbed wire
A halo and a horn
connected by a cross
Symbolizes you, symbolizes us
I see torn pieces of you
some jagged, some smooth
and fitting together perfectly
to form perfection
Perfection
in the eye of the beholder - me
The angel - you
You can be my heaven
and I will be your hell
One cannot exist without the other
I will lead you into temptation
Corrupt you with my lust
Tear your heart from your chest
it will always be mine...
Once you have loved me
you will never love another...
Burn my name into your soul
Your pain will be my pleasure
You, my angel
cradle me in your soft blue wings
Love me tenderly then
rock me gently to sleep
For tomorrow is another day
Then I will be your heaven and
you can be my hell
Lead me into temptation...
Published 3rd Dec 2011
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Anonymous
3rd Dec 2011 12:40pm
this is just perfect.
4th Dec 2011 10:48am
Thankx AliP,
Does that mean that I finally have written a good one or written one well ?
Vixen ;-)
Does that mean that I finally have written a good one or written one well ?
Vixen ;-)
Anonymous
5th Dec 2011 6:37am
You've witten a good one, very well.
5th Dec 2011 7:14am
3rd Dec 2011 6:12pm
4th Dec 2011 10:54am
Thankx for your comment TyeHowzie. I am really pleased that you enjoyed my words.
Cheers Vixen ;-)
Cheers Vixen ;-)
3rd Dec 2011 6:14pm
Both angels and devils seem to thrive on movement; could just be me but these days that may be more motion then what most people are searching for?
4th Dec 2011 11:00am
Ah Jazz,
There is never too much movement!! Wether it be by angels or devils.. Not sure where I want to go - heaven or hell?
I will have to think about that..
Vixen ;-)
There is never too much movement!! Wether it be by angels or devils.. Not sure where I want to go - heaven or hell?
I will have to think about that..
Vixen ;-)
Perhaps but from the attitudes of the people I run into movement isn't something they value, with the pace of modern life. With the insecurities and uncertainties rampant, staticity is seen as a way to take a pause and examine things a bit better.
But then what do I know, according to some political operators, any black person who sides with the same party as the President Obama is "brainwashed and still living on a plantation".
Now your words have me thinking of that line from Pink Floyd's "Wish You Were Here"; 'So, so you think you can tell. Heaven from hell. Blue skies from pain. Can you tell a green field. From a cold steel rail? A smile from a veil? Do you think you can tell?'
But then what do I know, according to some political operators, any black person who sides with the same party as the President Obama is "brainwashed and still living on a plantation".
Now your words have me thinking of that line from Pink Floyd's "Wish You Were Here"; 'So, so you think you can tell. Heaven from hell. Blue skies from pain. Can you tell a green field. From a cold steel rail? A smile from a veil? Do you think you can tell?'
3rd Dec 2011 6:23pm
My Miss Vixen X.
Seeming to be nothing without me
My heaven is my hell
My he'll is my heaven
Will this truly be forever
Only time will tell
It is scratched into my skin
And now burnt into my heart
And just think, it's just the start
I will bleed with your blood
As my heart pumps of you
Let me see everything you are
Everything all brand new
For now I am your fallen angel
With my burnt wings
Through our orgasms your name... It sings
To feel the hand that write of this
Is something I will never miss.
Seeming to be nothing without me
My heaven is my hell
My he'll is my heaven
Will this truly be forever
Only time will tell
It is scratched into my skin
And now burnt into my heart
And just think, it's just the start
I will bleed with your blood
As my heart pumps of you
Let me see everything you are
Everything all brand new
For now I am your fallen angel
With my burnt wings
Through our orgasms your name... It sings
To feel the hand that write of this
Is something I will never miss.
4th Dec 2011 11:04am
Atropabelladonna,
I never know how to reply to you - should we continue / finish each others comments / poetry ??
See tatto my name?
I am really lovin' your words though..
Vixen ;-)
I never know how to reply to you - should we continue / finish each others comments / poetry ??
See tatto my name?
I am really lovin' your words though..
Vixen ;-)
9th Dec 2011 2:39am
