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Until It Runs Out

the wounds your words
left me with
have begun to fester
hatred and indifference
started replacing the loyalty
biology has burdened me with

Written by delanee

Published 13th May 2019 | Edited 14th May 2019

#childhood #father #memories #rejection

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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am

14th May 2019 8:30am

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delanee

14th May 2019 1:06pm

I am so happy that you picked that one sentence out, because I was astounded myself when that came on to paper and frankly I still think it's a strong one. So I am just really glad that you agree.
Thank you for calling this art, thank you for the warm welcome. It is immensely appreciated!
Delanee

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Re. Until It Runs Out

inechoingsilence

14th May 2019 11:32am

I know you, so I will totally gently push. Has it only started to fester? Is your loyalty only starting to be replaced? Don't hold back - I see the making of quite the gifted terse poetess.