Sonnet in a Wheelchair

It ain't easy even spilling a crippled sonnet!!
aaargh!
the rhyming and the syllables!!

But Yeah,
I did it and did it for You, Lover

I really gotta stop being so damn curious - lol

Super glad to see you trying your hand at something new but you just fkn lost me at “I nosh on your sexy ass”... sorry.

Thank you for sharing up until then.

-M

This comes from Word Hippo:

Verb -- Nosh
Eat food enthusiastically or greedily

thank You for reading and sharing with me

LOL - Sky just told me what that word means in the UK

I understand the confusion now

No I know what it means.

Love is the greatest Muse of all - and when it strikes, it strikes hard and blows the walls away from any limitation.  Well done, Tallen; a poet marching as to war, with the pen of poetry going on before.

She did Free me of having to write it
and i told her am gonna go ahead and finish

Nearly anything she's asked of me poetically
i have risen to the challenge.

Yeah,
it MUST be LOVE

appreciate the kind share

Sky_Dancer's "Sonnet Masochism" is  pretty damn perfect in terms of iambic pentameter  :))  
 
Otherwise you could try:  
Shakespeare's Sonnet No: 18 - a love sonnet in iambic pentameter that plays around with the form  
"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? " etc, etc     :))

Nope - this is my first and last sonnet

I did it because Em asked me to
and i still don't understand iambic pentameter
and probably need a class in learning about it.

I read all of Sky_dancer's ink and always marvel
and enjoy

"and i still don't understand iambic pentameter
and probably need a class in learning about it."
... no worries, I'll put iambic pentameter on my "to do" list re my "On ..." series {so far in my back-archive you'll find On Triolets, On Free Verse, On Haikus, On Limericks, On Luc Bats .. and more}    :))

Sign me up for all of that shit!!!

Evidently,
reading a broad range of subjects
is not enough with this spilling gig

" iambic pentameter "

Stuff such words those are for the prosodistic name droppers. Those who can't manage anything but pretended teach and so resort to bluff with their made up words. To wit, prosody as a set of nomenclatures for the poet composers to use in making their music. These, invented by idle prosodists !  A mere matter of opinion.  Can you believe that these things dare to control and direct we artists. The twats!

whatever i did to evoke this response
i am truly sorry

i truly meant no harm

i wish You well on Your present journey

You must mean the ' bollox? ' Take no notice it's just me being my usual hysterical, paranoid self. Thinking someone's trying to put me down and my first instinct is to attack.

as someone who has endured lots of meanness  
ESPECIALLY after i rec'd my diagnosis,  
i know  
 
and no harm done, here.  i've healed (somewhat)  
 
Still, what did You mean by Your comment?  
 
With You, i was seeking education on my poetry.

I can't find it now and I can't remember the context in which it was made.