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When he doesn't ejaculate
No more sucking, gagging, deep-throating
My mouth is numb
The pain is real
Hunny you're taking forever
This is how I feel
A servant to your unshakable dick
I even licked it with plenty of spit
Rubbed it up and down
Used plenty of suction
Cupped the crown
But the semen's stuck inside
I follow your orders
Did not hide
My head bobbing up and down
Heck, my neck is sore
Even if I made your penis raw
It would still defy me
I'm bowing out
This is your settle to score.
My mouth is numb
The pain is real
Hunny you're taking forever
This is how I feel
A servant to your unshakable dick
I even licked it with plenty of spit
Rubbed it up and down
Used plenty of suction
Cupped the crown
But the semen's stuck inside
I follow your orders
Did not hide
My head bobbing up and down
Heck, my neck is sore
Even if I made your penis raw
It would still defy me
I'm bowing out
This is your settle to score.
Published 8th May 2019
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Anonymous
8th May 2019 7:36pm
Time to change dick my dear. You did your part, now, if a man can't react good to that, he's got issues!
10th May 2019 1:55pm
Yeah tell me about it. This was written about a real experience. I was down there for such a long time & he just wouldn't cum.
12th May 2019 11:23pm
perhaps no mind to pluck...but in there somewhere...another day...
i love the last line...and perhaps all that he deserves...
sorry your efforts were unfruitful...but it gave you this write! :)
i love the last line...and perhaps all that he deserves...
sorry your efforts were unfruitful...but it gave you this write! :)
12th May 2019 11:28pm
