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If You Say It
This guarded intimacy
suspends us
in this hungry state
of craving
secrets lived
and unexplored
if only...
the enticements
of possibilities
angles,
permissions,
lingering behind
our concentrated interests
could be spoken
perhaps...
suspends us
in this hungry state
of craving
secrets lived
and unexplored
if only...
the enticements
of possibilities
angles,
permissions,
lingering behind
our concentrated interests
could be spoken
perhaps...
Published 7th May 2019
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- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
8th May 2019 00:13am
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8th May 2019 10:54am
8th May 2019 3:11pm
Hmm. Yes. The craving, is intense !
And, the spoken word is much more powerful, in that there is nothing to misinterpret as it is what it is.
If one says it, one tends to believe it.
I tend to struggle with text alone... as I need the whole experience of presence; body language, eye contact, and most importantly, touch !
Sighs. I miss those things, the most.
And, the spoken word is much more powerful, in that there is nothing to misinterpret as it is what it is.
If one says it, one tends to believe it.
I tend to struggle with text alone... as I need the whole experience of presence; body language, eye contact, and most importantly, touch !
Sighs. I miss those things, the most.
8th May 2019 3:38pm
Yes, the written word is always at risk of interpretation. But at least it allows the imagination to have some fun. But I agree, nothing quite like the entire experience.
