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Recherché Almirahs
Your stars,
galaxies of radiant Beauty
cause me to remember
how I drowned when I fell
into You……..
the sparkling wells
embedded in Your eyes
Struggling to breathe
reaching for comet tails
flailing about achingly
stretching to capture
the rings
any golden rings
of any planet nearby
Unaccomplished
I ceded my all
my wealth of twinkling
diamonds and pearls
adding to Your
armoire universe
and the dross from
our searing coronas
sealed a love
to last until our rebirth
or the death of a
universe
Trying, failing
beginning again
Living, learning
knowing no end
bound to You
we are free to
share the celestial
gems to all
with the heart
to understand
galaxies of radiant Beauty
cause me to remember
how I drowned when I fell
into You……..
the sparkling wells
embedded in Your eyes
Struggling to breathe
reaching for comet tails
flailing about achingly
stretching to capture
the rings
any golden rings
of any planet nearby
Unaccomplished
I ceded my all
my wealth of twinkling
diamonds and pearls
adding to Your
armoire universe
and the dross from
our searing coronas
sealed a love
to last until our rebirth
or the death of a
universe
Trying, failing
beginning again
Living, learning
knowing no end
bound to You
we are free to
share the celestial
gems to all
with the heart
to understand
Written by
Tallen
(earth_empath)
Published 6th May 2019
| Edited 9th Oct 2019
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Re. Recherché Almirahs
6th May 2019 8:02pm
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6th May 2019 8:08pm
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6th May 2019 8:14pm
You know,
if You have the hiccups and suck a a lime wedge
the hiccups go away! (a Bartender in Las Vegas taught me that)
thank You for the kind praise
if You have the hiccups and suck a a lime wedge
the hiccups go away! (a Bartender in Las Vegas taught me that)
thank You for the kind praise
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6th May 2019 8:16pm
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Anonymous
6th May 2019 9:34pm
Oh wow...this is an incredibly beautiful metaphoric piece. So rich in imagery and longing. Well done!
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6th May 2019 9:52pm
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7th May 2019 2:00am
Gorgeous Tallen, with a sweet, evocative cadence, unhurried and rich. A precious distillation of alchemy. 💖🙏
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Wow, wow!!
I am floored from all this attention to this spill
I told Em, maybe i was channeling?
anyways,
i am very appreciative of the read
and kind shares
I am floored from all this attention to this spill
I told Em, maybe i was channeling?
anyways,
i am very appreciative of the read
and kind shares
Re. Recherché Almirahs
11th Jun 2019 4:19am
That first stanza intrigued me in quickly. The comparisons to the beautiful cosmos I adore, made this extra juicy for me. This is going to be a hard choice!!
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Re: Re. Recherché Almirahs
11th Jun 2019 7:10am
Wow - You saw this in the comp, right?
I had no idea it was good enough
but just wanted to contribute something
super happy You liked this spill
thank You for the kind praises
and Honored for the RL add
I had no idea it was good enough
but just wanted to contribute something
super happy You liked this spill
thank You for the kind praises
and Honored for the RL add
Re. Recherché Almirahs
30th Jun 2019 9:32am
I am rarely at a loss for words but this really brought me into deep highs and it won't let go. For me, this is.. It.
Unexplainable notions and truths, really, that I have experienced the same love, and the same understanding and I'm truly floored by your beautiful way to weave it. I feel it to my core 💖 Thank you so much for this piece. It made me remember, even deeper, outside this Time and Space.
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Skye
Unexplainable notions and truths, really, that I have experienced the same love, and the same understanding and I'm truly floored by your beautiful way to weave it. I feel it to my core 💖 Thank you so much for this piece. It made me remember, even deeper, outside this Time and Space.
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Skye
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30th Jun 2019 5:41pm
I am ever happy when another spirit
Feels and Understands this type of love
and though not easily describable i keep
trying to convey my Feel
Very appreciative of Your read and wonderful share with me.
Honored for the RL add
Feels and Understands this type of love
and though not easily describable i keep
trying to convey my Feel
Very appreciative of Your read and wonderful share with me.
Honored for the RL add
Re. Recherché Almirahs
30th Jun 2019 8:38pm
This.... You scribed what it means beautifully Tallen
Connection right here for sure, thank you.. Inlak'esh
Connection right here for sure, thank you.. Inlak'esh
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30th Jun 2019 10:35pm
Super share, Brother --
Love the Mayan reference to
<< interconnectedness >> to each other
and the the universe!!
Grateful for the kind praise and
Honored for the RL add
Love the Mayan reference to
<< interconnectedness >> to each other
and the the universe!!
Grateful for the kind praise and
Honored for the RL add
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30th Jun 2019 11:01pm
You are most welcome. It is not easy putting into words that kind of connection. Thank you and remember.. In these dark days be the light my friend
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