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Stories
Along the pilgrimage path
life purged and plundered
minds wept and wondered
weeds steadfastly grew
knowing not what we now knew
weary travelers groaned and grumbled
stepping cross wayward stones, tumbled
some had stumbled or even fell
seeking separate stories to tell
ink driven, dried up, cursed, then forgiven
bent in half, twisted, some curved
tales told, valient bold and self served
where whispers turned and ran
down alongside stolen scripts
falling elegantly off loose lips
masses cheered the absurd
romantic scenes poetically heard
death defied and defiled
joyous celebration in a time
infectious an emancipation
liberated through rhyme lest relief
"To weep is to make less the depth of grief"
life purged and plundered
minds wept and wondered
weeds steadfastly grew
knowing not what we now knew
weary travelers groaned and grumbled
stepping cross wayward stones, tumbled
some had stumbled or even fell
seeking separate stories to tell
ink driven, dried up, cursed, then forgiven
bent in half, twisted, some curved
tales told, valient bold and self served
where whispers turned and ran
down alongside stolen scripts
falling elegantly off loose lips
masses cheered the absurd
romantic scenes poetically heard
death defied and defiled
joyous celebration in a time
infectious an emancipation
liberated through rhyme lest relief
"To weep is to make less the depth of grief"
Author's Note
Quote by Shakespeare
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Re. Stories
3rd May 2019 9:21pm
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3rd May 2019 9:24pm
This spill and content had me remembering
Chaucer's
The Canterbury Tales.
Love the rhythm here
Chaucer's
The Canterbury Tales.
Love the rhythm here
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3rd May 2019 9:57pm
Re. Stories
3rd May 2019 10:29pm
Eloquent work, JusTim. Love the way in ties into the Shakespeare quote. Vivid and classy write.
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Anonymous
4th May 2019 1:20am
When you talk about pilgrimage
I`m reminded of the beginnings
of the world that is today, particularly
amongst artists, poets, etc. who`ve
made the journey to create the
masterpieces that we school ourselves
on a day-to-day basis and about
the sufferings that came with making
legends great... like I said, this is what
I see...
thought provoking ink, JT
~MSD

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Re: Re. Stories
4th May 2019 1:28am
Your vision is amazing, I was in discussion with a friend about the poets and playwrights of old and how many of those that are famous today weren't really the originators of the stories. They were spread by word of mouth and honed by the best story tellers such as Shakespeare. There are many conflicting stories as to whether or not he authored all of his poems/plays.
Thanks MSD 🙂
Thanks MSD 🙂
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Anonymous
4th May 2019 1:33am
``Playwrights`` was the other word I was thinking of
but couldn't remember
so I ended up reverting to ``etc.``
I did not know about the conflicting stories; so
there`s something I learned today. It`s
almost like going back to school, but not;)
but couldn't remember
so I ended up reverting to ``etc.``
I did not know about the conflicting stories; so
there`s something I learned today. It`s
almost like going back to school, but not;)

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Anonymous
4th May 2019 1:54am
Ah, damn!

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Re. Stories
4th May 2019 5:32pm
I love the spiritual aspect of this one, Tim. And the history so associated with evolution of humankind. That fnal line is amazing and ripples through the reader like stone through water.
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4th May 2019 5:42pm
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4th May 2019 5:44pm
It shows, Tim. those who read classic literature imbue its essence within their own.
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6th May 2019 5:43am
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Anonymous
6th May 2019 9:03pm
All the journeys this touches on and no two alike, but the words here will connect them as one. Beautifully done

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6th May 2019 9:21pm