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Distant
Knowing that no one is there with me.
I still hope someone will be there to catch me when i fall.
Im just a rainstorm over the horizon.
Im just a floor covered in broken glass.
Im just a trajic story with peices missing.
Im just a rose with a haunted past.
Just ice flaming magicly.
Just a lone wolf dying not so trajicly.
I still hope someone will be there to catch me when i fall.
Im just a rainstorm over the horizon.
Im just a floor covered in broken glass.
Im just a trajic story with peices missing.
Im just a rose with a haunted past.
Just ice flaming magicly.
Just a lone wolf dying not so trajicly.
Published 1st Dec 2011
| Edited 12th Dec 2011
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I like this poem.... Because its similar to how I feel..... And sorry you feel this way :(
1st Dec 2011 10:48pm
Thank you so much! and im sorry you feel the same way. I know that we will both have our day full of sunshine and people we love :)
Anonymous
15th Dec 2011 12:17pm
Hello,
For a first write thats just fantastic.
Lovely stuff
Keep writing and welcome to the family.
Good to have you at DU!
Al -x-
For a first write thats just fantastic.
Lovely stuff
Keep writing and welcome to the family.
Good to have you at DU!
Al -x-
