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I have an appetite that doesn't consume
I have an appetite that doesn’t consume,
A hunger inside for which nothing will do.
Every satisfaction for a time subdues,
But again it wakes up to gnaw.
I’m carrying a bomb that I need to drop,
Every nook of the world seems like such a good spot
But as I run around looking for it,
It doesn’t matter where, all in all.
08-05-2009
A hunger inside for which nothing will do.
Every satisfaction for a time subdues,
But again it wakes up to gnaw.
I’m carrying a bomb that I need to drop,
Every nook of the world seems like such a good spot
But as I run around looking for it,
It doesn’t matter where, all in all.
08-05-2009
Published 3rd May 2019
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3rd May 2019 4:19pm
3rd May 2019 4:22pm
dearest Phantom great write
I feel you do have a bomb to drop
and whether you realize it or not it hits the intended target
right on time...
love Brenda ❤
I feel you do have a bomb to drop
and whether you realize it or not it hits the intended target
right on time...
love Brenda ❤
3rd May 2019 5:09pm
3rd May 2019 6:23pm
Hello Alina,
Your write is effective in it's succinct yet charged symmetry. Clarity of flow is a strength you continue to exhibit.
Daniel
Your write is effective in it's succinct yet charged symmetry. Clarity of flow is a strength you continue to exhibit.
Daniel
4th May 2019 00:30am
Thank you, Daniel! We all have our own style and I feel a big part of the journey is developing it into what it wants to be.
4th May 2019 4:12am
Absolutely, well said. My writing has grown immensely since I began bit my core style has remained.
