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lying eyes
the kaleidoscope of pain
reveals visions of my torment
alone with my thoughts
I turn inwards
wheels turn and show a new view of agony
no matter how it's shaded or colored
it will still be hurt plain and simple
a heartbroken heart can't be consoled
it will scream its discontent until you listen
liquor only brings out the beast in it
the heartbroken heart is vicious
it'll tell you the truth
no candy coating the bullshit
the lingering lies;
you tell yourself to make yourself feel alright
is starting to feel like a thin veil
in a lineup of convicted liars
it's no who done it
your conscious shouts you did
shame is your alibi for the night in question
but guilt will always tell on you...give you over to Truth
it's all in your eyes baby
you can't lie
sentenced to life without your man
you die a little more inside
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Re. lying eyes
2nd May 2019 5:10am
Re: Re. lying eyes
2nd May 2019 5:11am
Re. lying eyes
2nd May 2019 6:21am
"wheels turn and show a new view of agony
no matter how it's shaded or colored"
Powerful stuff Crims...
love
Jeff
no matter how it's shaded or colored"
Powerful stuff Crims...
love
Jeff
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Re: Re. lying eyes
2nd May 2019 6:25am
thank you dearest Jeff I'm not writing at my best right now just a bunch of raw emotions...
I deeply appreciate the love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate the love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. lying eyes
2nd May 2019 6:31am
bullshit...you ARE writing at your premium as long as it is connected to raw emotions...and a bunch of them is even better...
I love your writing and you
Jeff
I love your writing and you
Jeff
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Re: Re. lying eyes
2nd May 2019 6:34am
thank you for the love dearest Jeff you know I've been avoiding writing lately because as you know we get in touch with our truest feelings through this medium... I didn't want to feel these emotions...
I deeply feel the love...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply feel the love...
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. lying eyes
2nd May 2019 6:39am
Yes...I know you deeply feel many things, as I do....that is your blessing and your curse...
But great art is impossible without it...
J
But great art is impossible without it...
J
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Re: Re. lying eyes
2nd May 2019 6:48am
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2nd May 2019 12:48pm
Re: Re. lying eyes
2nd May 2019 1:07pm
Re: Re. lying eyes
2nd May 2019 2:43pm
mine don't dearest Snuggle I can't deceive anyone while looking them in the eyes it always shows on me the truth... thank you for reading and for sharing your thoughts it's deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. lying eyes
3rd May 2019 3:56pm
"a heartbroken heart can't be consoled"
I agree!
This piece touched me deeply Brenda.
Coz this is me.
I agree!
This piece touched me deeply Brenda.
Coz this is me.
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Re: Re. lying eyes
3rd May 2019 4:06pm
thank you dearest Oxy for feeling this so deeply it pains me you can relate to this type of hurt... hugs...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. lying eyes
16th May 2019 11:00pm
Crim, you have laid your emotions for all to see with such beauty. You have the gift of taking the reader by the hand, holding them close, and letting them go with a piece of you. All the while they leave you a bit of themselves, letting you know that you are not alone, but with kindred souls.
Love it.
Love it.
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Re: Re. lying eyes
18th May 2019 00:00am
thank you beautiful Bonzi for such a beautifully thoughtful comment...kindred souls that really moved my heart...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. lying eyes
7th Jul 2019 11:09pm
Alcohol a good thing and the worst, just enough and you can feel relaxed happy having fun, too much and then everything that's eating away at you bursts forth and you can say so much do so much and hurt so much, eyes are the windows to the soul and after to much drink you cannot lie they will give you away.
We are all guilty of something and try to hide it and it will destroy us but here you share it all touch us all show us all that we are not alone in what we feel, its so true the pen is mightier than the sword as you Brenda and so many others have proved long may it continue. I salute you Master of the pen
We are all guilty of something and try to hide it and it will destroy us but here you share it all touch us all show us all that we are not alone in what we feel, its so true the pen is mightier than the sword as you Brenda and so many others have proved long may it continue. I salute you Master of the pen
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