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Words I Attempt To Keep Close
"Write poetry like no one is reading"
.....Cold_fusion
"People meet us where they are, not where we are."
…..carried forward from another by Daniel Christensen
The better I be
it is my belief
letting these words
into subconscious creep
Keep them in mind
for the value they're worth
while traversing time
and my journey on Earth
Let my words go
in the fashion they flow
yet always be mindful
of thoughts they may sow
There's much to be said
of "stay true to yourself"
if I leave all unkindness
on misery's shelf
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Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
30th Apr 2019 8:34pm
Damn this is a good one and I really love how the other writes influenced this one
Hail
Hail
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Re: Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
30th Apr 2019 8:46pm
There's much to be gained from those quotes.
Thank you for the visit and comment.
Thank you for the visit and comment.
Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
30th Apr 2019 9:24pm
Re: Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
1st May 2019 00:02am
Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
Anonymous
30th Apr 2019 11:21pm
I wish there were a way I could give this ink a standing ovation...but my best accolades are simply this, Yeah, like that!!!

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Re: Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
1st May 2019 00:09am
Don't get up on my account, the "Yeah, like that!!!" is music enough to my ears.
Thank You, very happy you enjoyed it
Thank You, very happy you enjoyed it
Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
1st May 2019 1:50am
I think the rhyme is quite mellifluous and harmonious with the gentle and candid warmth of your message. It's inspired work. I'm glad to have said something that resonates. God knows I say a lot of rubbish besides. 😅
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Re: Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
1st May 2019 2:45am
You have no idea how far these two quotes have carried me of late.
Indeed it was inspired, by two of the best people I have come to know here.
Thank you, my friend.
Indeed it was inspired, by two of the best people I have come to know here.
Thank you, my friend.
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1st May 2019 5:15pm
Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
1st May 2019 12:06pm
It's the story-web of life that is our strength and binds us together - neatly penned.
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Re: Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
1st May 2019 6:14pm
Yet the sadness is it can encompass so many years in the weaving before we appreciate the beauty of the structure.
I always appreciate your visits, Josh, Thank you,
I always appreciate your visits, Josh, Thank you,
Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
2nd May 2019 3:41pm
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2nd May 2019 4:19pm
Thank you, Joseph.
I will keep you and your country in my thoughts, and hope for better times.
Welcome to the DUP, as well.
I will keep you and your country in my thoughts, and hope for better times.
Welcome to the DUP, as well.
Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
3rd May 2019 1:44pm
you are Teri.... what you are AND where you been...till now
an amalgamation of light, wisdom, truth, joy, sorrow, blood, tears, flesh and bones!
and a poet! and then you project.... that light unto corners no flame can penetrate...
floored and humbled(beyond deserving at least on this scribbler's and an honored brother's part) Daniels' words...and his elemental light is there for all to see!
yours is..what we see, feel know
an amalgamation of light, wisdom, truth, joy, sorrow, blood, tears, flesh and bones!
and a poet! and then you project.... that light unto corners no flame can penetrate...
floored and humbled(beyond deserving at least on this scribbler's and an honored brother's part) Daniels' words...and his elemental light is there for all to see!
yours is..what we see, feel know
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Re: Re. Words I Attempt To Keep Close
3rd May 2019 7:35pm
No way to reply other than Thank You, brother, and continue my journey, stepping in the footprints of those lead by example and leave an expression of their impressions.