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Good Vibes
Good Vibes
Peace patters like raindrops
On my roof of dreams
Like soft fingertips
Massaging my mind
Peace patters like raindrops
On my roof of dreams
Like soft fingertips
Massaging my mind
Published 30th Apr 2019
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30th Apr 2019 9:03am
1st May 2019 9:50pm
30th Apr 2019 11:56am
I love a good rain in the roof. So peaceful and you’ve captured it beautifully. Well done!
1st May 2019 9:51pm
30th Apr 2019 4:09pm
1st May 2019 9:52pm
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1st May 2019 9:32pm
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1st May 2019 9:53pm
14th May 2019 8:30pm
Glad I read this before bed. It's delicate and sweet... Just like the sound of rain on a window. The best lullaby nature has to offer.
Well written!
Delanee
Well written!
Delanee
15th May 2019 2:23am
Delanee, it pleases me greatly that this was your bedtime lullaby. Glad you enjoyed. :)
John
John
