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Blackened Rainbows
Colors are bland
the vibrance has changed
dimmed into something else
the beauty has withered
and the sun just isn't as bright
could it be my eyes, my mind
thats changed or is this lackluster
life my new reailty?
the vibrance has changed
dimmed into something else
the beauty has withered
and the sun just isn't as bright
could it be my eyes, my mind
thats changed or is this lackluster
life my new reailty?
Published 29th Apr 2019
Author's Note
I tried to use #black and #racism popped up as my choice. Fix this theme bullshit or dont make it mandatory.
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Anonymous
29th Apr 2019 3:11pm
I hooe Your outlook changes but this is tight ink
29th Apr 2019 3:15pm
I'm not really depressed whatever thing im channeling is 😂 thanks for reading Ragnar.
Anonymous
29th Apr 2019 3:43pm
You are welcome
29th Apr 2019 4:51pm
I like the downbeat overall effect of your tight verses - interesting use of vibrance - I have always used vibrancy - so thanks for introducing me to another option
29th Apr 2019 5:04pm
After your comment i had to google if i had used it correctly 😂😂 thanks for reading
29th Apr 2019 6:45pm
You had - and I binged it - so all the powers that be are onside for vibrance - smiles - sorry - I should have been clearer.
29th Apr 2019 5:00pm
All beauty changes, morphs into things not so beautiful (ugly) & dies.
What can one do?
I love NikiMo.
What can one do?
I love NikiMo.
29th Apr 2019 5:06pm
Nothing to do except watch it burn and find some semblance of something in the looming haze. 😘😘❤
29th Apr 2019 9:01pm
Sometimes it's the filters of our minds that change our perceptions ... Had way too much time to realize that ... Good write ... #fixthemes ... Bless and love ... ..
