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It's Only Love
There you sat amongst the fescue
the yellow dotted posies
full sun ever growing still
the morning breeze blew
at your curl
I bent down to take you in
a scent of fresh ambrosia
with flecks of care
mixing the spring time air
it was love dancing before my eye
wild and free
it was in your nature
and in me
long soft kisses til June
my heart did beat then swoon
your vision held my gaze
I so amazed
your skies painted blue
on not just one afternoon
drunk, with no misgivings
life, disorderly
mysteriously moves
in such harmonious content
I look back at you
at that twinkle
thru the haze
the yellow dotted posies
full sun ever growing still
the morning breeze blew
at your curl
I bent down to take you in
a scent of fresh ambrosia
with flecks of care
mixing the spring time air
it was love dancing before my eye
wild and free
it was in your nature
and in me
long soft kisses til June
my heart did beat then swoon
your vision held my gaze
I so amazed
your skies painted blue
on not just one afternoon
drunk, with no misgivings
life, disorderly
mysteriously moves
in such harmonious content
I look back at you
at that twinkle
thru the haze
Published 21st Apr 2019
Author's Note
Happy Easter M K
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21st Apr 2019 2:47pm
I love to see a new word like fescue or an unfamiliar one in others' verses
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21st Apr 2019 3:25pm
That final tercet is wonderful, Tim. It encapsulates the entire verse beautifully. You have some wonderful imagery contained within this. It's as though she was a flower.
21st Apr 2019 5:00pm
21st Apr 2019 11:50pm
Great ink Tim. I felt the breeze and smelled the posies. A great poet can paint a picture and take the reader into their realm! And you my friend are a great poet!!
21st Apr 2019 11:59pm
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22nd Apr 2019 2:51pm
I'm feeling spring in every line here. Beautiful imagery. Happy late Easter :-)
22nd Apr 2019 3:11pm
Thanks Willow, there was a bunny in the yard eating the grasses and the dandelion were in abundance, the little ones were picking them and handing them out to all the relatives... happy Easter 🙂
22nd Apr 2019 3:04pm
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