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Enlightenment
There's a playful chirp
outside my window
and today
I don't want to shoot her dead
I've said my peace
there's enlightenment in my head
the sun she brings her smile
warming up a chilly day
she's been gone for awhile
but I know now she's here to stay
the coffee is hot like my memory
as I swirl you around inside
each sip a kiss of happiness
from the times we laughed and cried
so sweet, for not the innocent
guilty, but still we ride
to dream a dream of wonderment
one life, two souls collide
outside my window
and today
I don't want to shoot her dead
I've said my peace
there's enlightenment in my head
the sun she brings her smile
warming up a chilly day
she's been gone for awhile
but I know now she's here to stay
the coffee is hot like my memory
as I swirl you around inside
each sip a kiss of happiness
from the times we laughed and cried
so sweet, for not the innocent
guilty, but still we ride
to dream a dream of wonderment
one life, two souls collide
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Re. Enlightenment
18th Apr 2019 2:06pm
Re. Enlightenment
Anonymous
18th Apr 2019 2:46pm
Sometimes the collision is everything. Thank goddess that sunshine is around to stay awhile! :-)
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Re: Re. Enlightenment
18th Apr 2019 2:54pm
Re. Enlightenment
Anonymous
18th Apr 2019 2:51pm
NICE !!
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
18th Apr 2019 4:21pm
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Re: Re. Enlightenment
18th Apr 2019 4:34pm
Re. Enlightenment
18th Apr 2019 5:31pm
Hope Springs Eternal
let's hope a whole lot of collisions take place this upcoming spring
let's hope a whole lot of collisions take place this upcoming spring
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Re: Re. Enlightenment
18th Apr 2019 5:53pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
18th Apr 2019 6:50pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
18th Apr 2019 8:47pm
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Re. Enlightenment
18th Apr 2019 9:56pm
Fine work, JusTim. You equate enlightenment with happiness, an ideal combination. Knowledge can be harsh, but you present it with a gentle touch. Well done!
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