deepundergroundpoetry.com
Self control
Woke up to snow in April
I've only had one coffee
And you, the control-freak
Tell me I'm irresponsible
Because I'm not like you
These are days when I
Keep a straight face
Wait for the house to empty
Then find peculiar joy
In Scandinavian death metal
Published 17th Apr 2019
| Edited 16th Aug 2019
Author's Note
It's just too easy to feel hateful in the morning
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 0
comments 11
reads 583
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
17th Apr 2019 5:37pm
18th Apr 2019 2:56am
18th Apr 2019 7:23am
My wife fell in love with her long-term partner before me thru a Swedish death metal forum. She was in the US, he was in Sweden. She went and lived with him in Sweden for 5 years, learned to speak fluent Swedish. She still has a soft spot for that music. As for me, I like the more melodic stuff like Opeth.
17th Apr 2019 9:39pm
Not familiar with death metal or the Scandinavian form, but I enjoyed this thoroughly. Fine job, brokentitanium!
18th Apr 2019 3:00am
Noise and screaming, basically. Lyrics that I suspect I'm glad I can't understand. Adrenaline-pumping anger release. :)
Glad you enjoyed my little meltdown! Thanks for visiting.
Glad you enjoyed my little meltdown! Thanks for visiting.
19th Apr 2019 5:34pm
20th Apr 2019 2:26am
It is a rather delicious freedom when they're all out the door....
Thanks for the visit and comment!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
20th Apr 2019 4:50am
Control freaks control nothing...
perhaps this realisation is a dog chasing its tail...
Freedom is sometimes need not mean breaking the jail... just the belief and unyielding self sovereignty!
For some its death metal...for many it is DU or music from the teen years!
perhaps this realisation is a dog chasing its tail...
Freedom is sometimes need not mean breaking the jail... just the belief and unyielding self sovereignty!
For some its death metal...for many it is DU or music from the teen years!
20th Apr 2019 2:08pm
Sometimes the angry punk from my teen years isn't quite enough....
Music is my best outlet for the entire boggling range of human emotions. My collection is beyond eclectic!
Music is my best outlet for the entire boggling range of human emotions. My collection is beyond eclectic!
20th Apr 2019 12:13pm
20th Apr 2019 2:03pm
