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A CHILD'S VOICE
When is it time for you to get your life right not only with the most highest spiritual soul but with the ones you claim to love, as you keep on doing them wrong and you call that love from the heart and soul. For when is it time when you stop trying to get over on life and open your eyes with the awakening of your mind, for that's no way to live life for how are you suppose to show your child that you can be who and what you are within there eyes for are you a man of strength and courage and self pride. So I ask you from man to man when you look into your child's eyes when is it time, for you to get it right as a father in the most highest spiritual way of life and in the eyes of your child for when will you man up and step up and be that man in the eyes of a child.
Published 17th Apr 2019
| Edited 18th Apr 2019
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A moment taken from out of the story book of life
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2019 1:48pm
I like where you went with this one. Speaking deeply of the example parents need to send if they want their children to believe in both the parent and themselves. Example is our best means of learning as children. Some lessons we take from childhood are brutally taught and others more subtly. How we're seen through the eyes of our children speaks deeply of who we are. This is a strong example of that. Thank you for entering!
7th Aug 2019 2:00pm
Thank you for your comment and yes you are right on point basically this is a story taken from out of my own life, and yes some lessons are brutally taught mines were mentally emotionally physically, that is why I promised myself that I would never be that kind of man for children's see as well as remember for in order to change the cycle, you must change the mind of the ones who see with open eyes meaning the children's.
