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Sex, Porn, Lust ..................(and other Myths and Lies)
(Author's Note.......this was the result of a rousing conversation I had with a friend today)
Feelings. Raw sexuality
Erotica,
Pornography
Wantonness, Unbridled Lust.....
….....so much less
the shape, roundness and thickness of her ass
Or the the size of his dick
The way his full balls hang down
or those juicy , pussy lips
It's the “feeling”............ yes, those inner sensations.
What it looks like to the minds eye
It evokes that deep, nether-worldly tingle
Causing the heart to beat heavily and heat to rise from between
full, voluptuous thighs.
Vivid, visual cues become the fuel
that stokes the fires
causes an eminent burn, a yearning
an overwhelming desire to just.........
…..do the damn thing!
Stop, look, listen.........and you'll see.
The rippling of her abdominal muscles
flexing and releasing
Synapses firing.......body needing pleasing
Mmmmmm................you know what that feels like
and that brings out the voyeur in you
You stare, eyes wide shut and feel the need too..................
Maybe it's the way the fluids begin to ooze
His mushroom-shaped head expanding........the purity of his clear, copious juice
beginning to stream from his strained opening
Those thick veins appearing
his shaft hard and thick...............
…........and his balls draw in closer
his cock begins to throb
You remember that feeling inside you
the way your hands massaged that slippery wet knob
Is that what you see? Is it less than you hear?
Those torrid, hot body movements. Is it starting to become crystal clear?
Her nipples are hard and pointed
he sucks them between his lips
pinching them between his fingers
her chest rises and dips
The lens zooms in to capture
her creamy white juices-how they flow
That sweet sticky thing, her moist lips
the rhythmic contraction of her vagina
…..and that bit of “taint meat” just below.
And her back door is opening and closing
Her body, wet and flushed
We watch in amazement......
Caught up in our own heat; consumed by our own lust.
We “feel” the passion, a fire rages deep within
Engulfed by that nervous anticipation
The will to commit our own delicious sin
Not so much what we see............
but ohhhhhh what we feel
the conversion of the visual
to sensations that seem; that "feel" so damned unreal..........
.........but yet so damned divine
The allure of the erotic,
the hedonistic rush
For which the eye can see
it simply becomes...........
us
Feelings. Raw sexuality
Erotica,
Pornography
Wantonness, Unbridled Lust.....
….....so much less
the shape, roundness and thickness of her ass
Or the the size of his dick
The way his full balls hang down
or those juicy , pussy lips
It's the “feeling”............ yes, those inner sensations.
What it looks like to the minds eye
It evokes that deep, nether-worldly tingle
Causing the heart to beat heavily and heat to rise from between
full, voluptuous thighs.
Vivid, visual cues become the fuel
that stokes the fires
causes an eminent burn, a yearning
an overwhelming desire to just.........
…..do the damn thing!
Stop, look, listen.........and you'll see.
The rippling of her abdominal muscles
flexing and releasing
Synapses firing.......body needing pleasing
Mmmmmm................you know what that feels like
and that brings out the voyeur in you
You stare, eyes wide shut and feel the need too..................
Maybe it's the way the fluids begin to ooze
His mushroom-shaped head expanding........the purity of his clear, copious juice
beginning to stream from his strained opening
Those thick veins appearing
his shaft hard and thick...............
…........and his balls draw in closer
his cock begins to throb
You remember that feeling inside you
the way your hands massaged that slippery wet knob
Is that what you see? Is it less than you hear?
Those torrid, hot body movements. Is it starting to become crystal clear?
Her nipples are hard and pointed
he sucks them between his lips
pinching them between his fingers
her chest rises and dips
The lens zooms in to capture
her creamy white juices-how they flow
That sweet sticky thing, her moist lips
the rhythmic contraction of her vagina
…..and that bit of “taint meat” just below.
And her back door is opening and closing
Her body, wet and flushed
We watch in amazement......
Caught up in our own heat; consumed by our own lust.
We “feel” the passion, a fire rages deep within
Engulfed by that nervous anticipation
The will to commit our own delicious sin
Not so much what we see............
but ohhhhhh what we feel
the conversion of the visual
to sensations that seem; that "feel" so damned unreal..........
.........but yet so damned divine
The allure of the erotic,
the hedonistic rush
For which the eye can see
it simply becomes...........
us
Published 29th Nov 2011
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29th Nov 2011 4:55am
Hmmm yes it does seem surreal at time and vividly real at others you have described something so sublime in vivid detail,time for the cool shower .... very cool brother M
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
29th Nov 2011 5:01am
Just my two cents but this is truly epic. At the very least it should be recommended to anyone in the business of making erotic cinema that seeks to go beyond the goal of pure economic enhancement. Like those songs that stand the test of time, I do believe there are films portraying the beauty intercourse that succeed on deeper level of adding to the world of classic art to treasured forever.
29th Nov 2011 5:12am
The visual & feeling.............2-n-1 making me want to cum! I had to read it twice, because the feeling was so nice!
I recognized a lil Stylistics in this read.....Stop, Look, Listen!
You may take a bow on this piece! ;)
I recognized a lil Stylistics in this read.....Stop, Look, Listen!
You may take a bow on this piece! ;)
29th Nov 2011 5:17am
.....for the comments. We are all voyeurs at some level. Why are there so many hypocrites?
29th Nov 2011 5:38am
Perhaps because the United States has a certain puritanical character to our society?
29th Nov 2011 5:45am
LOL.........LMAO!!!!! Puritanical? No. Hypocritical, yes. Excuse the language, Explorers, slave traders, etc. came to the center of civilization to get cheap labor, missionaries and masters tried to domesticate the savages and impose religious beliefs. Yet, mulatto children were still born, tribes of indians evolved, etc. Puritanical? Jazz are you kidding me? Hypocritical. ; )
29th Nov 2011 6:11am
I won't argue with the description you suggested- just thought puritanical more accurately reflected th avoidance of issues relating to sex that people of other nations find backwards and silly. In contrast images of violence can be found everywhere. Indeed your words have me thinking about one of Prince's gems, "Colonized Mind". I had been out of the loop regarding the "purple one's" more recent musical creations so that song took me back to "Sign O'The Times".
29th Nov 2011 6:13am
+1 on "Signs" I'm gonna go You Tube that one right. Give these Altec Lansings (pre-import) a chance to thump ; )
29th Nov 2011 3:27pm
Excuse me fellas, may I interject my two pennies from a woman's point of view? Brother M, Now that I am fully awake(I wasn't before)(you fellas are brilliant and intellectually sexy)the mind is the most sexiest organ in the human body, it can do wonders to stimulate or castigate. You brother M are very correct, American society has a huge double standard when it comes to being sexual and towards sexuality in general. We sit up here and condemn anything and everything sexual but internally wish to have the courage to do say or experience that which we are judging to be immoral or unacceptable behavior. In my experience the more prohibitive a society is the more aberrant behavior becomes, IE pedophilia, bestiality etc. The impositions of religious beliefs was the supposed answer to everything, yet it has become a pivotal part of the problem. We need to be comfortable in our own skin explore sexuality from within and feel... what is good to us.
smoochessss lol
Gypsy red
smoochessss lol
Gypsy red
29th Nov 2011 7:58am
very sensual, with a certain degree of cynicism I see. Love can sometimes translate into lust. Its just us. MusicallyMrM, a good piece.
29th Nov 2011 2:17pm
29th Nov 2011 4:11pm
Just maybe the vagueness comes from reading this with a very narrow focus. (and I'm not being critical of the critique at all-it is welcome)
btw....I visted your blogspot Shanda. Really good stuff. : )
I almost felt that after the fact that in spite of the erotic vibe, this was more observational. I wanted the readers to get caught up in the site and sensation of the sexuality. Most of us when caught up in arousal see from a more sensory perspective when we are sexually (or I prefer sensually aroused) We "feel" the hardness, the virility-some might even say a certain violence in the image of a hard, engorged penis that causes a stronger, deeper emotion when we are aroused. If you have ever *felt* a big penis enter your womb, then seeing the same activates a learned feeling or emotion. That's why sex is so powerful.
If you observe a female body extremely aroused, you see the wetness and your mind interprets "process"-what caused that to come about. What's causing her sexual organs/muscles to move, to react to the stimulation? Even for a man, you can remember the entry into the vagina and how it felt to you-what it must feel like to her. It evokes a deeper feeling beyond the rudimentary that is powerful.
That brings me to second intention of the poem. The common denominator so to speak. Something so physical, natural. Something so immensely pleasurable. Something so "second nature" to essentially all of us as we are born of sexuality, have experienced sexuality. How is it that there are still those who are so uptight, so overly critical of a sexually permissive society? As Jazz said....so puritanical in perceptional to the desire or for that matter "the right" to enjoy sexuality? Why do so many still see sexuality as something wrong? That was my focus in this poems creation. Such an hypocracy-such an irony.
btw....I visted your blogspot Shanda. Really good stuff. : )
I almost felt that after the fact that in spite of the erotic vibe, this was more observational. I wanted the readers to get caught up in the site and sensation of the sexuality. Most of us when caught up in arousal see from a more sensory perspective when we are sexually (or I prefer sensually aroused) We "feel" the hardness, the virility-some might even say a certain violence in the image of a hard, engorged penis that causes a stronger, deeper emotion when we are aroused. If you have ever *felt* a big penis enter your womb, then seeing the same activates a learned feeling or emotion. That's why sex is so powerful.
If you observe a female body extremely aroused, you see the wetness and your mind interprets "process"-what caused that to come about. What's causing her sexual organs/muscles to move, to react to the stimulation? Even for a man, you can remember the entry into the vagina and how it felt to you-what it must feel like to her. It evokes a deeper feeling beyond the rudimentary that is powerful.
That brings me to second intention of the poem. The common denominator so to speak. Something so physical, natural. Something so immensely pleasurable. Something so "second nature" to essentially all of us as we are born of sexuality, have experienced sexuality. How is it that there are still those who are so uptight, so overly critical of a sexually permissive society? As Jazz said....so puritanical in perceptional to the desire or for that matter "the right" to enjoy sexuality? Why do so many still see sexuality as something wrong? That was my focus in this poems creation. Such an hypocracy-such an irony.
29th Nov 2011 4:19pm
excuse my typos and grammatical errors. I am still trying to awake from this comma' LOL it's still early for me.
8th Dec 2011 5:06am
Man, your depth of explanation blows me away! Thanks for the insight. I only wish that I could examine an erotic poem I tried to write as skillfully as you do. Social/observational stuff, no problem...indeed I may reflect the irony you identify.
Anonymous
1st Dec 2011 4:50pm
very good piece indeed!
3rd Dec 2011 5:14pm
Well I've been gone awhile lol.. This muse was not me lol.. Very erotic music as always well done sir
4th Dec 2011 2:46am
It is good to see you back precious. Let us not speak on muses ; ) Now, write us something searing and intense as only you can ; ) Missed U
6th Dec 2011 5:08pm
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10th Dec 2011 5:12pm
Hey MX3. This one is long but it held my attention. You let if flow, like some voyeuristic radio reporter doing a good job, bringing your natural ability with rhyme to bear subtly and to good effect. No WAY I was touching that dial! Nice one. R.
11th Mar 2012 11:38am
a great poem, you have described lovemaking anf the movements so well here.
