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Lost battle
My heart was pulled in by your fire
My body trembled with desire
Passion that fed my soul
But so many mask you hold
The more I gave the more you took
Realizing I’m just another chapter in your book
You had a clean slate
You’re in your own way
Letting go is something you lack
Three steps forward and 5 steps back
I thought if I loved you harder and harder
you would really let me in
but my masked man
Even in the beginning your mindset was on the end
My body trembled with desire
Passion that fed my soul
But so many mask you hold
The more I gave the more you took
Realizing I’m just another chapter in your book
You had a clean slate
You’re in your own way
Letting go is something you lack
Three steps forward and 5 steps back
I thought if I loved you harder and harder
you would really let me in
but my masked man
Even in the beginning your mindset was on the end
Published 11th Apr 2019
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I never had a chance
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11th Apr 2019 2:56pm
11th Apr 2019 6:26pm
Anonymous
11th Apr 2019 4:00pm
You had to get that off...couldn't hold it any more...and dropped it ...some spot at the door....did you tell him to leave...was he on hand and knee...how ever it went, you stood tall not bent. Yeah like that!
16th Apr 2019 6:42pm
Love, it's amazing and also frustrating and hurtful.... The many mask one wears and the layers you have to go through to get to the real person and even then do you ever truly get to the real person. You pull they push, they pull you push, never ending cycle, but that is how one may know that person is not meant to be with them for the long haul. In my opinion when it's right, it will just fit and masks naturally come down. Nice flow.. Truth spoken.
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
17th Apr 2019 00:00am
This poem could be so much better with a little care. But needless to say, he must be mad to let you slip through his fingers!
17th Apr 2019 00:57am
Thanks !
I’m just now getting the courage to write again a lil rough around the edges
I’m just now getting the courage to write again a lil rough around the edges
17th Apr 2019 1:20am
I like what you're saying in your poems. It's fresh & raw. These are real emotions you are spilling here.
