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Realization
I Just Realized...
If I walked past you
would you recognize me?
I’ve never seen your face
But the connection we have is real!
You’ve seen my picture
But I could be a mixture
Of a million people
You’ve came across in a crowd
Would I standout...
Without a doubt?
I know you see me with ya mind’s eye
But is that enough
To make you undeny
What we had together?
Poetically
Our chemistry,
Undeniably
Our ministry!
Our sexual suggestion
Was perfection!
Our intellectual connection
Was a blessing!
I miss our
Interactions.
Never forget me!
And
When your poexual urges get too loud...
Always search for me
In the crowd
If I walked past you
would you recognize me?
I’ve never seen your face
But the connection we have is real!
You’ve seen my picture
But I could be a mixture
Of a million people
You’ve came across in a crowd
Would I standout...
Without a doubt?
I know you see me with ya mind’s eye
But is that enough
To make you undeny
What we had together?
Poetically
Our chemistry,
Undeniably
Our ministry!
Our sexual suggestion
Was perfection!
Our intellectual connection
Was a blessing!
I miss our
Interactions.
Never forget me!
And
When your poexual urges get too loud...
Always search for me
In the crowd
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Re. Realization
7th Apr 2019 1:41pm
A nice first offering, I like to believe connected souls will find each other in a crowd
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Re. Realization
7th Apr 2019 1:49pm
Wonderful write my dear ... welcome to DUP ... great job with the line breaks ...
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Re. Realization
7th Apr 2019 2:48pm
Somethings are unforgettable; true connections are but one.
Lovely first offering. It was a delight.
Lovely first offering. It was a delight.
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Re. Realization
7th Apr 2019 7:10pm
Interesting question, does the connection traverse from the correspondence to real life. I've seen it go both ways. Fine work. Welcome to DUP.
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Re. Realization
7th Apr 2019 8:00pm
There will always remain an ache when souls have made a connection
be it sapiosexual or intimate and real life
it's the cord to the Heart Chakra the keeps our hopes alive
wonderful 1st spill
& welcome to the Deep
be it sapiosexual or intimate and real life
it's the cord to the Heart Chakra the keeps our hopes alive
wonderful 1st spill
& welcome to the Deep
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Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Oct 2022 6:45pm
8th Apr 2019 11:08am
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Re. Realization
10th Apr 2019 9:57pm
really enjoyed this the second half really took off for me
your wordage was cool and your flow was dope
amazing display of things to come
Welcome to DUP...
your wordage was cool and your flow was dope
amazing display of things to come
Welcome to DUP...
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
11th Apr 2019 9:19pm
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Re. Realization
24th Apr 2019 1:53am
Ink affairs can be amazing but it can be hard to control. This piece resonates. Hard to resist the sexiest part of someone, their mind. Once again, great ink!
- Minxy
- Minxy
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Re. Realization
25th Apr 2019 2:26pm
Re: Re. Realization
25th Apr 2019 6:33pm
I have lots of crappy prose hidden around here about my connection. It still stirs bittersweet nostalgia and tears.
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