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Remembering Journeys
I'm not here today
just like I wasn't yesterday
or the day before
my mind's adrift
floating thru the memories
and the impossibility
the midnight serenades
sitting under your window
I throw no rocks
only love, inside kisses of hope
remembering journeys
and sometimes a name or two
but I'll never forget those baby blues
and the oceans of peace they breathe
my lips not parched
nor salted eyes
wide open I drift
for tomorrow's today will make history
and memories, written in pain
and heart, happiness
I won't be here today
I'll be off on a journey
taking in views
breathtaking mountains
and the beautiful you
just like I wasn't yesterday
or the day before
my mind's adrift
floating thru the memories
and the impossibility
the midnight serenades
sitting under your window
I throw no rocks
only love, inside kisses of hope
remembering journeys
and sometimes a name or two
but I'll never forget those baby blues
and the oceans of peace they breathe
my lips not parched
nor salted eyes
wide open I drift
for tomorrow's today will make history
and memories, written in pain
and heart, happiness
I won't be here today
I'll be off on a journey
taking in views
breathtaking mountains
and the beautiful you
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Re. Remembering Journeys
Anonymous
7th Apr 2019 12:34pm
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7th Apr 2019 1:04pm
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7th Apr 2019 1:24pm
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7th Apr 2019 2:21pm
I find it a really clever poem about appreciating and living in the present moment, whilst the wording on first sight suggests living in the past & future.
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7th Apr 2019 2:25pm
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Anonymous
7th Apr 2019 2:22pm
Reflecting .... love this
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Re. Remembering Journeys
7th Apr 2019 7:23pm
this reads almost like a spill with zen thoughts and tendencies
and the flow from beginning to end is sublime
well done, Brother
and the flow from beginning to end is sublime
well done, Brother
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7th Apr 2019 11:26pm
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7th Apr 2019 11:47pm
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Anonymous
8th Apr 2019 5:37pm
I'm reading serenity and hope all through these lines!
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8th Apr 2019 5:50pm
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9th Apr 2019 3:03am
you remain as a refreshing being, just as much as you were yesteryear
always a pleasure
always a pleasure
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