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Cut In Half

What do you do when you are constantly critized
When do you stop caring about what people think of you
Do you ever know when it's time to let the past go
I'm the one who is judged my every choice I make
I'm the one who wants everyone to be proud of who I am
I'm the one who wishes the past would leave me alone
I'm tired of people flunting their opinion in my face
I'm tired of being critized for being a writer instead of a nurse
I'm tired of people cutting my feelings in half
I just what someone to look at me with kind eyes and a warm smile
I want them to utter the words that everyone likes to here
"I'm proud of you..."
Written by Countrygirl96
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