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Fear in your eyes
I see fear in your eyes..
yes..
the fear of
failure..
the possibility of
always participating as a
perpetual pariah..
a castaway
caught in the current,
carelessly corroding away..
I know
I'm not here to stay.
despite the dreadful dullness
that drags me down each passing day,
I understand
it's only my choice to see things
this way..
it's only me
not allowing myself
to be
free
yes..
the fear of
failure..
the possibility of
always participating as a
perpetual pariah..
a castaway
caught in the current,
carelessly corroding away..
I know
I'm not here to stay.
despite the dreadful dullness
that drags me down each passing day,
I understand
it's only my choice to see things
this way..
it's only me
not allowing myself
to be
free
Published 4th Apr 2019
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4th Apr 2019 8:45pm
unfortunately, Your spill can and often is relatable
I have my Good days and I have my very sad days.
Today I'm good.
I love reading "Self" spills before i begin to read everything else because I want to know my spiller
try to make a connection. It helps me to understand.
& so thank You for sharing.
I have my Good days and I have my very sad days.
Today I'm good.
I love reading "Self" spills before i begin to read everything else because I want to know my spiller
try to make a connection. It helps me to understand.
& so thank You for sharing.
Thanks for this comment tallen!
Much appreciation
Same here, I'm grateful I have more good then bad tho sometimes my mind dwells on the negatives but still I can see each moment is precious
Thanks for reading!
Much appreciation
Same here, I'm grateful I have more good then bad tho sometimes my mind dwells on the negatives but still I can see each moment is precious
Thanks for reading!
7th Apr 2019 9:48am
It's something to know others feel this way too.
I think it's about loyalty to self as oppose to other's perception of us when in failure. Some people manage well in failure. I believe it's bc they still appreciate themselves even while failing.
I think it's about loyalty to self as oppose to other's perception of us when in failure. Some people manage well in failure. I believe it's bc they still appreciate themselves even while failing.
7th Apr 2019 4:55pm
Appreciate you reading and leaving this great comment!
I agree with your words
Thanks for reading!
I agree with your words
Thanks for reading!
