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love song
dancing on a warm gentle breeze
carry us away with ease
to the soft horizon
where the promise
of a new day
embraces two souls
that have fallen deeply
and insanely
in love...
carry us away with ease
to the soft horizon
where the promise
of a new day
embraces two souls
that have fallen deeply
and insanely
in love...
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Re. love song
3rd Apr 2019 3:30pm
a beautiful love song indeed dear ML!
succinctly put! gentle yet powerful in its effect
succinctly put! gentle yet powerful in its effect
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3rd Apr 2019 7:33pm
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3rd Apr 2019 9:58pm
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4th Apr 2019 10:58pm
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4th Apr 2019 10:59pm
Re. love song
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2019 10:15pm
You are a very romantic soul and this poem is an apotheosis of pure love. Beautiful and essential.
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4th Apr 2019 10:58pm