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Life and Death
bleak black night
running stumbling flight
heart pounding head is light
tears stinging loss of sight
adrenaline pumping
wolves calling ears ringing
tripping scraping bleeding
fright disorienting
dark open glade
distance remains
pushing the limit
muscles strained
startled still unbudging
my scream all I hear
tumbling going down
complete silence no fear
running stumbling flight
heart pounding head is light
tears stinging loss of sight
adrenaline pumping
wolves calling ears ringing
tripping scraping bleeding
fright disorienting
dark open glade
distance remains
pushing the limit
muscles strained
startled still unbudging
my scream all I hear
tumbling going down
complete silence no fear
Published 29th Mar 2019
| Edited 30th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Nailed it fifty words with none repeating!
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29th Mar 2019 3:47pm
I think i recall You saying something to that effect
(You ain't talking about me, though! i am just me - the one who has difficulty understanding the abstract of Life and the universe)
(You ain't talking about me, though! i am just me - the one who has difficulty understanding the abstract of Life and the universe)
29th Mar 2019 3:54pm
My version or definition of Life
that I spilled:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/336038-lost-in-sentience/
in case You missed it. See how there's very little abstract to my spillage........
that I spilled:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/336038-lost-in-sentience/
in case You missed it. See how there's very little abstract to my spillage........
29th Mar 2019 4:05pm
29th Mar 2019 11:14pm
really like this, felt like i could hear that panicked breathing . I like that there isn't anything specific, just that rawness of emotion that transported that godawful feeling. i was there, well done.
29th Mar 2019 11:17pm
30th Mar 2019 11:57pm
5th Apr 2019 7:49pm
