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Diabolically Yours
Some point out malevolence
The dark detailing of my mind
Say I am prone to violence
And proffer only lies that bind
But I am, by nature, lacking care
Concerning those who defame me
I note those inclined to stare
All cretins far as I can see
I might be a wicked man
But I offer you my guiding hand
I may lead you, when I can,
Where plots are hatched, then fully planned.
The dark detailing of my mind
Say I am prone to violence
And proffer only lies that bind
But I am, by nature, lacking care
Concerning those who defame me
I note those inclined to stare
All cretins far as I can see
I might be a wicked man
But I offer you my guiding hand
I may lead you, when I can,
Where plots are hatched, then fully planned.
Published 29th Mar 2019
Author's Note
I try to be a decent person but, sad to say, it doesn't always work....
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29th Mar 2019 00:13am
The workings of the mind can be unexplainable...we try but forces can bring us into a different realm
29th Mar 2019 00:19am
Very true. Fortunately, my days of diabolism are long past. I think of them now, and quail. Thank you, JusTim!
29th Mar 2019 00:25am
29th Mar 2019 00:31am
Thank you LilDragonFly. If you don't face your shadows, particularly those from a wayward past, they overtake you. Can't have that.
29th Mar 2019 1:07am
Crow, you had me at the title. For real. I am making this comment without even reading. I fucking love diabolical shit. You got my number. <3 ( now Ill read it lol love ya. )
29th Mar 2019 1:51am
The title may well say it all. Thank you, mysteriouslady , for the comment and RL entry!
And this is sexy and insightful and has made me re read it several times, I could talk on this one for days. In my list. Nice Crow. <3
29th Mar 2019 1:56am
29th Mar 2019 1:58am
Anonymous
29th Mar 2019 1:20am
Crow.. I know this feeling.. the person you strive to be, and the struggles of yesterday.. well written, into the list it goes.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
29th Mar 2019 2:00am
I've had a diabolical past that I wish I could live down. I'm working on it. Thank you for the comment and RL entry, Dave!
29th Mar 2019 10:03am
30th Mar 2019 11:23pm
29th Mar 2019 5:04pm
I think we all have this inner struggle between, for lack of better words "good vs. bad". I know I certainly do so I enjoyed reading this. These lines especially:
"I might be a wicked man
But I offer you my guiding hand
I may lead you, when I can,
Where plots are hatched, then fully planned"
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"I might be a wicked man
But I offer you my guiding hand
I may lead you, when I can,
Where plots are hatched, then fully planned"
x
30th Mar 2019 11:25pm
Anonymous
30th Mar 2019 00:29am
You are a very good man. Who says different doesn't know what the hell they're on about.
Thank you J. I like to think my actions prove benevolent. It's my thoughts that are dark and retributive. And thanks for the inclusion in your reading list. You honor me.
30th Mar 2019 5:30am
I have a hard time believing you do anything but this "offer you my guiding hand
I may lead you, when I can"
....but I give you credit for facing that demon. Another damn good write!! On the list...
I may lead you, when I can"
....but I give you credit for facing that demon. Another damn good write!! On the list...
30th Mar 2019 11:30pm
And that demon often looks back with some appetite for my soul. Thank you Pandora, for the comment and inclusion in your reading list.
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