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Romantic Vignettes
Long before the whisper's
fell down
upon your solemn shoulders
as with new day dew's droplets
dangling so delicate, so free
I heard all about you
what was resting within
your beauty, your vision's quest
speaking thru shimmers
placed so gloriously
right in front of me
slight touch, curls to the sight
enfurled in more than mystery
an elegant flow
blinking under seas of blue
filling deep into a guise
somewhat larger than me, than you
before there were tumbles, spills
where fingers adjusted heights
where hopes hinged then swung open
passions, that melted
sated lips and springtime wishes
there were romantic vignettes
ready to be written, to be read
marked down in time for futures
not to look past, moments
where hearts connected
and feeling felt would forever last
fell down
upon your solemn shoulders
as with new day dew's droplets
dangling so delicate, so free
I heard all about you
what was resting within
your beauty, your vision's quest
speaking thru shimmers
placed so gloriously
right in front of me
slight touch, curls to the sight
enfurled in more than mystery
an elegant flow
blinking under seas of blue
filling deep into a guise
somewhat larger than me, than you
before there were tumbles, spills
where fingers adjusted heights
where hopes hinged then swung open
passions, that melted
sated lips and springtime wishes
there were romantic vignettes
ready to be written, to be read
marked down in time for futures
not to look past, moments
where hearts connected
and feeling felt would forever last
Published 28th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
28th Mar 2019 11:30am
This is really beautiful
28th Mar 2019 11:33am
28th Mar 2019 1:23pm
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28th Mar 2019 2:34pm
" there were romantic vignettes
ready to be written, to be read " <<<<----- this is because
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58T0NlhNweA
Everywhere we look around !!
ready to be written, to be read " <<<<----- this is because
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58T0NlhNweA
Everywhere we look around !!
28th Mar 2019 3:19pm
Anonymous
28th Mar 2019 2:42pm
Your romantic nature spreads such beautiful poetry across the page, Tim
28th Mar 2019 3:19pm
28th Mar 2019 2:55pm
Beautiful JT ... elegant ... gentle flow ... love this ... one of your best ...
28th Mar 2019 3:20pm
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29th Mar 2019 2:05am
This could be my favorite of yours, JusTim, but your body of work makes this a tough choice. Always love your lines.
29th Mar 2019 2:08am
Thanks you Crowfly my friend. At the moment I'm agreeing with you. My muse told me what to do and I listened..the perfect man lol
31st Mar 2019 4:20pm
Tim you are a hopeless romantic my friend! That with the ability to write like you do, I'm surprised you aren't batting women away like flies.
When you meet this muse that fuels your prose,
make sure it is you she loves
before "giving her your rose."
Pardon "The Bachelor" reference
You know Minxy likes to rhyme.
When you meet this muse that fuels your prose,
make sure it is you she loves
before "giving her your rose."
Pardon "The Bachelor" reference
You know Minxy likes to rhyme.
31st Mar 2019 7:19pm
Went over my head, never have watched the show...yes I do like romance...thanks M
