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I don't need you
I don't need you
to complete me
I am already whole
but I want you
to interact with me
with all your brilliance and all your flaws
I don't need you
to guide me and give me advice
I make my own decisions
but I want you
to discuss with me
and to give your opinion
I don't need you
but I want you completely,
your ingenious mind,
your loving heart
your bright soul
your sexy body!
I want you!
to complete me
I am already whole
but I want you
to interact with me
with all your brilliance and all your flaws
I don't need you
to guide me and give me advice
I make my own decisions
but I want you
to discuss with me
and to give your opinion
I don't need you
but I want you completely,
your ingenious mind,
your loving heart
your bright soul
your sexy body!
I want you!
Published 27th Mar 2019
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27th Mar 2019 10:25pm
Haha yes ying and yang, give and take, true fifty-fifty. we agree with this piece
24th Mar 2024 6:42pm
28th Mar 2019 1:31pm
To whom this tribute is written, is indeed, a lucky man.
The women I know don't want my body, they just want my money. In fact, I'm so pathetic, the last woman who was my body, demanded double the money. Even more humiliating, she was my Dr. 😩
The women I know don't want my body, they just want my money. In fact, I'm so pathetic, the last woman who was my body, demanded double the money. Even more humiliating, she was my Dr. 😩
29th Mar 2019 11:00am
Oh snugglebuck! Your poems reflect a beautiful soul, a kind heart, and a thinking mind! This is more than enough for a woman to desire you in all respects. Don't play small! You deserve it!
21st Mar 2024 4:10pm
This poem is really well executed as well. We all want both sides to the coin. Yin/yang.
24th Mar 2024 7:05pm
Yes, I agree. It is important to recognize both sides of the coin to see the whole picture in order to be whole and well balanced.
Thanks a lot for your kind words! 💜
Thanks a lot for your kind words! 💜
