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Kingdom Come
Monday morning bearing down
He awakes, begins to drown
In thoughts of a troubled week
And solutions he must seek
But she manages to comfort him
Teach his troubles how to swim
Her mouth finds his trembling cock
Around which her lips begin to lock
Her tongue travels its entire length
Restoring his dormant strength
He will pay her a tidy sum
For transporting him to Kingdom Come.
He awakes, begins to drown
In thoughts of a troubled week
And solutions he must seek
But she manages to comfort him
Teach his troubles how to swim
Her mouth finds his trembling cock
Around which her lips begin to lock
Her tongue travels its entire length
Restoring his dormant strength
He will pay her a tidy sum
For transporting him to Kingdom Come.
Published 25th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
25th Mar 2019 5:55pm
that's my kinda alarm c(l)ock
very steamy write, mister
didnt think i'd enjoy rhythm in erotica
but I'm converting
very steamy write, mister
didnt think i'd enjoy rhythm in erotica
but I'm converting
25th Mar 2019 6:00pm
I can't resist rhythm and rhyme. It's kind of a compulsion, I suppose. So glad you enjoyed this, shadoe. You honor me with your comment and inclusion in your reading list. Thank you!
Anonymous
25th Mar 2019 6:11pm
Oh, lordy a gorgeous way to "Restoring his dormant strength"...love the rhyming.
25th Mar 2019 6:26pm
Some don't have much taste for rhyme, but I usually can't help myself. I try a freer form and get stuck almost every time. So thank you so much for that comment, and inclusion in your reading list, SoulzGirl.
25th Mar 2019 6:21pm
Very nicely composed, good rhythm and rhyme, and I can certainly understand the ending result.
However, I'd be somewhat concerned of that single tooth if the excitement got out of hand. :-)))
However, I'd be somewhat concerned of that single tooth if the excitement got out of hand. :-)))
25th Mar 2019 6:28pm
I didn't even notice that single tooth in the pic. Very observant, Amorous_tryst. Thank you for the comment!
25th Mar 2019 7:06pm
dearest Thomas thrilling erotic
you didn't miss a beat
and the content is red hot...
love Brenda 💕
you didn't miss a beat
and the content is red hot...
love Brenda 💕
25th Mar 2019 7:26pm
I always appreciate the subtlety of rhymes that sound incidental to the rhythm first. Whether intentional or not there's such an impact there.
Anonymous
25th Mar 2019 9:25pm
nothin` like a man
who Comes in his Kingdom ...
ero`ink, sir Fly
~Devlin
26th Mar 2019 9:43am
