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Charnel House
Where are we going
when we grow old?
Will we sit in a room
watching life go by
from an Old Folks tomb?
Awaiting the Grim Reaper’s
affections
replacing our pain and
Family rejections……….
Will we pass away the
hours
staring out the window
one day covered in
flowers?
Will we ever come to
realize
need to let go and love
before it’s too late?
(before)
Everyone
wonders
why did
_________i wait?
when we grow old?
Will we sit in a room
watching life go by
from an Old Folks tomb?
Awaiting the Grim Reaper’s
affections
replacing our pain and
Family rejections……….
Will we pass away the
hours
staring out the window
one day covered in
flowers?
Will we ever come to
realize
need to let go and love
before it’s too late?
(before)
Everyone
wonders
why did
_________i wait?
Written by
Tallen
(earth_empath)
Published 22nd Mar 2019
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Re. Charnel House
22nd Mar 2019 11:25pm
Re: Re. Charnel House
22nd Mar 2019 11:29pm
I was getting ready to be sad and You just now caused me to smile!!
(You have a Gift)
thank You
I know where my Family (what's left of 'em) is.
Maybe I'll give my Mom a call and ask if I can visit this weekend.
(You have a Gift)
thank You
I know where my Family (what's left of 'em) is.
Maybe I'll give my Mom a call and ask if I can visit this weekend.
Re: Re. Charnel House
22nd Mar 2019 11:33pm
My goal is to cause a ripple. Give a smile, perform an act of kindness, say hello to brighten someone's day. In return they will give kindness or smile to someone else and the ripple will build and build all around the world.
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Re: Re. Charnel House
22nd Mar 2019 11:36pm
Keep on keeping on, Brother!
Daily my goals are
Learn something new
and or do something nice for a stranger
I think I'll be adding
cause someone to smile
Daily my goals are
Learn something new
and or do something nice for a stranger
I think I'll be adding
cause someone to smile
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22nd Mar 2019 11:38pm
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23rd Mar 2019 4:20am
Re. Charnel House
22nd Mar 2019 11:32pm
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22nd Mar 2019 11:34pm
I am.......gotta make up for time lost.
Plus, I am the only one who plays with her cat
when i visit -- LOL
Plus, I am the only one who plays with her cat
when i visit -- LOL
Re. Charnel House
22nd Mar 2019 11:38pm
You know some pervs around here are going to really twist that Tallen. Whoops! I think she just did!!
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Re: Re. Charnel House
22nd Mar 2019 11:40pm
You're gonna have to help me out on this as
often
i don't understand what You mean (like now)
my mindset is in a different tunnel
envisioned
often
i don't understand what You mean (like now)
my mindset is in a different tunnel
envisioned
Re: Re. Charnel House
22nd Mar 2019 11:49pm
Holy CRAP You've got a twisted mind!!
But explained via PM
Yeah, agree, i could see readers reading into
it that way
ESPECIALLY readers from the UK because lots of their words don't mean the same as here in the U.S.
I got into so much trouble (or laughed at) when I'd
be chatting with that woman from Scotland and her pals.
But explained via PM
Yeah, agree, i could see readers reading into
it that way
ESPECIALLY readers from the UK because lots of their words don't mean the same as here in the U.S.
I got into so much trouble (or laughed at) when I'd
be chatting with that woman from Scotland and her pals.
Re. Charnel House
22nd Mar 2019 11:50pm
You knew my mind was twisted the first day you talked to me. Sorry, I'll be a good girl!
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Re: Re. Charnel House
22nd Mar 2019 11:52pm
Yeah i did...
it's why i attempted to refer You to others who might understand and interact with You better
than my poor excuse for interaction ever could
; )
it's why i attempted to refer You to others who might understand and interact with You better
than my poor excuse for interaction ever could
; )
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
23rd Mar 2019 00:02am
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Re: Re. Charnel House
23rd Mar 2019 00:05am
thank You for the read
I've met the Grim Reaper, twice
and each time i was told............
not yet.
I long to hear the response,
Yes, Tallen,
now. <3
appreciate Your comments
I've met the Grim Reaper, twice
and each time i was told............
not yet.
I long to hear the response,
Yes, Tallen,
now. <3
appreciate Your comments
Re. Charnel House
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2019 00:21am
There are no certainties in life...we gotta live fully present in every moment. Not save it for "the perfect moment"...it could be right now. Like the message here. :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. Charnel House
23rd Mar 2019 00:28am
Often when we get old (and not realize we are the old)
we hang onto the shit of pain, regret and waiting for apologies or forgiveness......
not willing to make the first move
the first outstretched hand of .........
let us talk about it.
It's exactly like this, Willow <3
we hang onto the shit of pain, regret and waiting for apologies or forgiveness......
not willing to make the first move
the first outstretched hand of .........
let us talk about it.
It's exactly like this, Willow <3
Re. Charnel House
23rd Mar 2019 4:18am
Great write & such truth. Easier said than done. Hope you got out T allen. Hugs
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Re: Re. Charnel House
23rd Mar 2019 8:44am
thank You
I will get out
I used to visit my Mom on a regular basis before my younger brother moved in with her and now that he's gone i get to renew the practice
I will get out
I used to visit my Mom on a regular basis before my younger brother moved in with her and now that he's gone i get to renew the practice
Re. Charnel House
23rd Mar 2019 4:57am
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23rd Mar 2019 8:45am
Re. Charnel House
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Mar 2019 11:58am
23rd Mar 2019 11:47am
no time like the present for an existential crisis, no?
this one suits my present mood wonderfully, i have a milestone birthday swift approaching and well, the crisis is strong in me ...
... i do believe it so vital tho, frustrating as it is, to worry and not always be in the now,
moments ov query & reflection are as important as letting go
[much unsolicited opinion here]
my dissertation aside, i loved this_
unsure why it made me think ov aging with alzheimer’s… but yes, that’s where my mind went ….
forgetting & forgotten
apologies for my maudlin on your page
i was moved.
with love
katja
ps the title... tiny gods... the title is a stroke of genius, macabrely beautiful... the images ov neglect & afterthought associated with those two words alone is quite a punch to the gut
this one suits my present mood wonderfully, i have a milestone birthday swift approaching and well, the crisis is strong in me ...
... i do believe it so vital tho, frustrating as it is, to worry and not always be in the now,
moments ov query & reflection are as important as letting go
[much unsolicited opinion here]
my dissertation aside, i loved this_
unsure why it made me think ov aging with alzheimer’s… but yes, that’s where my mind went ….
forgetting & forgotten
apologies for my maudlin on your page
i was moved.
with love
katja
ps the title... tiny gods... the title is a stroke of genius, macabrely beautiful... the images ov neglect & afterthought associated with those two words alone is quite a punch to the gut
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Re: Re. Charnel House
23rd Mar 2019 1:06pm
No need to ever apologize when sharing with me for I delight when I can draw movement and stir emotions in others -- especially spillers of ink.
I appreciate You reading and sharing with me.
thank You
Honored the the RL add
Titles for my spills are important to my writing as i try to make the title a part of the poem not as a label. Appreciate this share, as well.
I appreciate You reading and sharing with me.
thank You
Honored the the RL add
Titles for my spills are important to my writing as i try to make the title a part of the poem not as a label. Appreciate this share, as well.
Re. Charnel House
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2019 11:52am
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23rd Mar 2019 1:07pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
23rd Mar 2019 2:03pm
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Re: Re. Charnel House
23rd Mar 2019 3:05pm
When it's my time to go
i just want my being to be at peace
so no negative energies follow me
thank You for sharing Your thoughts with me
i just want my being to be at peace
so no negative energies follow me
thank You for sharing Your thoughts with me
Re. Charnel House
24th Mar 2019 1:21am
Hmm..i feel a deep regret after reading this...my gookum(grandmother) is in care and it is hard...anyways nice write bud
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I used to work in a convalescent hospital and worked for some aged who never -- not once while they were under my care -- were visited by family or friend.
I tried to provide compassionate care to each individual on the floor I was responsible for.
It's really tough
especially when WE FEEL (Decide) when we believe our time spent is no longer quality time.
My latter statement always takes me back to about 4 years in San Diego, CA where after work everyday I'd visit my cousin who was in a coma and the medical staff didn't know if she'd recover from the surgery given to remove the tumor.
I had NO idea if she'd be OK but kept going in hopes she might be. I read my crappy poems and other stuff to her and sometimes sing.
I never even thought that it was a waste of time. . .
and now in retrospect?
Nope
I still don't think it was a waste of (my) time.
I tried to provide compassionate care to each individual on the floor I was responsible for.
It's really tough
especially when WE FEEL (Decide) when we believe our time spent is no longer quality time.
My latter statement always takes me back to about 4 years in San Diego, CA where after work everyday I'd visit my cousin who was in a coma and the medical staff didn't know if she'd recover from the surgery given to remove the tumor.
I had NO idea if she'd be OK but kept going in hopes she might be. I read my crappy poems and other stuff to her and sometimes sing.
I never even thought that it was a waste of time. . .
and now in retrospect?
Nope
I still don't think it was a waste of (my) time.
Re: Re. Charnel House
24th Mar 2019 1:45am
Charnel House
25th Mar 2019 3:15pm
Wow, this is a view from the tomb!
All USABLE time embodies itself in each fleeting second of the present, and nowhere else.
Yesterday too late and tomorrow too early, to make a difference where love is instant life.
Well said.
cab
All USABLE time embodies itself in each fleeting second of the present, and nowhere else.
Yesterday too late and tomorrow too early, to make a difference where love is instant life.
Well said.
cab
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Re: Charnel House
25th Mar 2019 7:40pm
a reminder that we actually don't have all the time in the world in our corporeal form
always appreciate Your reads and share on my spills
thank You
always appreciate Your reads and share on my spills
thank You