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Poetry Is Breath
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Published 22nd Mar 2019
Author's Note
For Poetry Day Competetion couldn’t get layout the way I wanted but hey ho
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22nd Mar 2019 8:44am
It’s my current autistic obsession next to my first and constant obsession music so I breathe both
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22nd Mar 2019 11:04am
Didn’t want to do a long indeed poem where the focus would be lost thank you for kind comment
22nd Mar 2019 12:01pm
What a great sentence! The form is clever as well!
Thank you for entering! Best of luck in the comp!
Thank you for entering! Best of luck in the comp!
22nd Mar 2019 12:54pm
Much too simple to win anything but thought it was appropriate for Poets Day in describing that those who write poetry exhale a breath while those that read inhale oops and thank you for kind comment
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2019 2:44pm
It's a tough layout to nail. I've struggled with it myself. Love the way it breathes though. Brought me a smile :-)
...Willow
...Willow
22nd Mar 2019 2:55pm
This my first attempt. At a new layout usually just centre all my stuff happy to bring a smile thank you
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22nd Mar 2019 3:55pm
