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Never to love
Only to hear her gentle voice
Entreating taste of her skin
Outer sensation of her breath
As we touch inside this sin,
A broken heart's blind eyes
Our spirits clasped in time
Will the fates ever realize?
Those sweet lips upon mine.
Published 17th Mar 2019
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Alone walk with her poem to rhyme...
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
17th Mar 2019 9:10pm
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17th Mar 2019 9:18pm
18th Mar 2019 3:31am
18th Mar 2019 4:10am
The world would be unlivable without...Thank you, dearest...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
18th Mar 2019 7:45pm
Oh Jeff ... I keep rereading this ... feel the ache ... the longing ... great emoting/evoking ... *sigh* ...
18th Mar 2019 9:39pm
To care for someone and make love to someone only from a distance puts the soul in prison...
19th Mar 2019 3:59am
I can't even think of anything to improve on this, it's wonderful. The structure, rhyme, and story is all there. Although I had to look up the meaning of entreating as the poet in me is very sleepy, but that is no fault of yours!
19th Mar 2019 4:07am
