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The Painter's Touch
After the tasting
that never quenches
entirely
I took you
like a canvas
rolled out
with soft dabs
from this brush
to alleviate
the suffering
from the spots
that kept you in knots
A kinder treatment
needed to invigorate
the trusts needed
to unclench
the dismissive,
selfish pricks
who could never
serenade
such a work of art
I know they clawed at you
without a care
for your sensitivities
that's why
I must remind you
that these impatient impulses
can be furnished
to fit you
in compassion
and approbation
The sigh signals me
that you are responding well
to the treatment
and when we swell
we shall swell together
that never quenches
entirely
I took you
like a canvas
rolled out
with soft dabs
from this brush
to alleviate
the suffering
from the spots
that kept you in knots
A kinder treatment
needed to invigorate
the trusts needed
to unclench
the dismissive,
selfish pricks
who could never
serenade
such a work of art
I know they clawed at you
without a care
for your sensitivities
that's why
I must remind you
that these impatient impulses
can be furnished
to fit you
in compassion
and approbation
The sigh signals me
that you are responding well
to the treatment
and when we swell
we shall swell together
Published 16th Mar 2019
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16th Mar 2019 5:22pm
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16th Mar 2019 5:33pm
SIGH....haha, just teasing. I wrote a piece that I need to drag out that pairs well.
I love those last to lines myself.. epic!! And
approbation was an unknown word until now. I lust it. Thank you😍
I love those last to lines myself.. epic!! And
approbation was an unknown word until now. I lust it. Thank you😍
16th Mar 2019 6:56pm
I irritate myself when I keep reusing the same word. It was a fitting one to replace the usual one that I had in mind. Look forward to see the fine pairing. ;)
16th Mar 2019 5:35pm
I know, the last two lines has me just.... whew. Epic write, my friend, kudos.
16th Mar 2019 6:57pm
16th Mar 2019 5:39pm
Don't laugh at this as it was more cheesy than remembered. Lol & I found a major place to edit reminding me to double check the same word isn't used 3 times back to back. *facepalm*
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/304320-fleshy-canvas/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/304320-fleshy-canvas/
16th Mar 2019 6:58pm
It can happen. I've caught myself doing it! Look forward to reading it. Headed there now!
18th Mar 2019 7:58pm
The sigh signals me
that you are responding well
to the treatment
and when we swell
we shall swell together
*sigh* no pun intended. That's just where this poem took me. Expertly penned Poet
18th Mar 2019 10:27pm
