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Hechizo
Touching smooth stones
With shaking fingertips
I try my best to atone
Lest I drown in my sins
Unassuming opalite
Can only bear so much
I soak up the last of it's comfort
Then allow it to be cleansed with a touch
Of moonlight from my windowsill
Now with dry lips---
"What I have done shall
Be no longer so
I mote it be
Suelta el hechizo".
With shaking fingertips
I try my best to atone
Lest I drown in my sins
Unassuming opalite
Can only bear so much
I soak up the last of it's comfort
Then allow it to be cleansed with a touch
Of moonlight from my windowsill
Now with dry lips---
"What I have done shall
Be no longer so
I mote it be
Suelta el hechizo".
Published 12th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Not one of my best, most intriguing poems or anything by any means, but I like it regardless and wanted to share one of my poems that wasn't just depressing as all hell.
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4th Aug 2019 6:18pm
From my perspective it is a very good write. Mind you, I have never read any of your other work to determine if it is up to par with your other writings. However, this has induced me to visit your page to do just that.
Thanks for taking the time to share this with us.
Thanks for taking the time to share this with us.
24th Aug 2019 6:55pm
Thank you! This isn't one of my favourite poems or anything, but I liked that it was something unusual compared to what I usually write about. Thank you for your feedback!
26th Aug 2019 11:45pm
You know, even if you like what you write, it will always touch another individual at some level. Artist are always overly critical about their work. Sometimes it take outside preservatives to make you see the gem hiding underneath.
