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Feeling Generic
This is starting to feel generic
Spilling over with many o'lyric
I must be writing too much
These pools of ink, a black sea
These shattered thoughts surround me
As my words act as my crutch
Oh, I must be going insane
For you all have entered my brain
And I'll have to treat you as such
But the underground entices me
She holds me dear and tightly
I'll try not to escape her clutch
Spilling over with many o'lyric
I must be writing too much
These pools of ink, a black sea
These shattered thoughts surround me
As my words act as my crutch
Oh, I must be going insane
For you all have entered my brain
And I'll have to treat you as such
But the underground entices me
She holds me dear and tightly
I'll try not to escape her clutch
Published 12th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Mmm, really just trying out a new writing style there. Not sure how I feel about it.
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Anonymous
12th Mar 2019 3:59pm
ooh I love the rhyme scheme very well done Liv ;)
12th Mar 2019 4:02pm
Well thank you! It was really new to me. I was wondering how it would flow to everyone :) Your comment is so appreciated!
Anonymous
12th Mar 2019 4:19pm
Thank you:) lol you've got yourself another follower:)
12th Mar 2019 4:22pm
12th Mar 2019 5:20pm
What a great piece! Well done👏👏
Resonates very much
Love the ending
"But the underground entices me
She holds me dear and tightly
And I'll try not escape her clutch"
Yesss! Literally
Love this👏👏
Resonates very much
Love the ending
"But the underground entices me
She holds me dear and tightly
And I'll try not escape her clutch"
Yesss! Literally
Love this👏👏
12th Mar 2019 10:16pm
