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Like Lust In The Chill Of The Grave
The men that find such beauty when it’s theirs,
Each one expects his sum for all he owns.
To walk and pace and call it forth by name,
While noting of each feature like his child.
Purveyors of the land on others’ backs,
These owners of the gullies, woods and vales.
The arteries that give drink to the fields,
Of long and winding rows so straightly plowed.
Corrections overseen by foreman’s hand,
Where script allots the hedge and masonry.
That show ahead where every tree will stand,
No curvature of range-breaks in the way.
Nor casting shadows of the day allowed,
May block the sun when tender shoots resist.
Who are these wants and bids forever scheme,
When soon they will be added to the soil.
They never bargain on the scythe of Death,
As all will breathe their last, O! happy dreams.
The Earth’s reply:
EARTH-SONG
“Ancient, yet
Everlasting on;
The stars have shown
Upon my seas
The skies;
For I am witness
Many times
Though not have I
Seen everything I am
Through your eyes.
“Solicitors
And rules abide
Succession of the wit
And writs that cast
In stone,
Yet shall be thus;
And only stone,
Long after men
And heirs are dust.
“So understand
And know the truth,
That what you do
Can ne’er replace
The blessings of nature;
For who I am,
There is
No place for me
In your sphere;
Nothing of me or mine
Is yours —
But with a grant, a nod
I let you stay.”
‘Twas when I heard the song,
I was shivering and cold.
Reduced to nothing more;
A man in his prime grown old.
#RalphWaldoEmerson
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 6th Mar 2019
| Edited 14th Jun 2019
Author's Note
•Inspired by “Hamatreya”, and the ‘Earth-Song’ within it, by Ralph Waldo Emerson.
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/52341/hamatreya
•For the Classic Corner competition “Transcendental”: tribute to Ralph Waldo Emerson, co-hosted by JohnnyBlaze & Ahavati.
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/52341/hamatreya
•For the Classic Corner competition “Transcendental”: tribute to Ralph Waldo Emerson, co-hosted by JohnnyBlaze & Ahavati.
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Re. Like Lust On The Chill Of The Grave
6th Mar 2019 8:28am
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6th Mar 2019 9:02am
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7th Mar 2019 3:28am
Just an update: that the exchange is now more clearly defined through a partial revision.🙏🏻
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7th Mar 2019 9:55am
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7th Mar 2019 11:22am
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6th Mar 2019 8:32am
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6th Mar 2019 9:34am
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6th Mar 2019 9:39am
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Anonymous
6th Mar 2019 2:21pm
Nicely said!
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6th Mar 2019 3:22pm
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Anonymous
6th Mar 2019 10:45pm
Did you write it?
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Apologies for the confusion! You had simply written “Nicely said”, and so I asked “what did I say?” See, others normally will say “nicely written”. So I took your comment literally - being so sleep-deprived as I was earlier. So now I can confirm that oh yes, most definitely, I wrote the piece, and that I thank you for enjoying it as you obviously did.
I think we are now well-met.🙏🏻
I think we are now well-met.🙏🏻
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Anonymous
7th Mar 2019 11:17am
It is a pleasure.
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6th Mar 2019 6:27pm
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7th Mar 2019 3:34am
Thank you, good sir... and even more truth perhaps, now that I did a partial revision to the midsection of my piece.🙏🏻
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7th Mar 2019 3:40am
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7th Mar 2019 3:43am
Thank you, my goodness, that was quick!
I take this as a hopeful sign that you approve.🙏🏻
I take this as a hopeful sign that you approve.🙏🏻
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7th Mar 2019 3:58am
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6th Mar 2019 9:39pm
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6th Mar 2019 9:43pm
Gosh, thank you Tim, that’s a wonderful thought. Thanks for dropping by , I’m glad you like the piece.
Re. Like Lust On The Chill Of The Grave
7th Mar 2019 11:27am
I agree with Tim, Jade. Nature is the seduction of the earth. I love how you experimented with this. Excellent entry. Best of luck in the comp.
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7th Mar 2019 11:38am
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How magical - as you read - to be transported to Lowell, MA, to Walden, to the rural townships of the emerging US and the legacy expressed in "The Poet(s)" who would become Walt Whitman and Emily Dickinson and beyond. What a great send up to Emerson and the echos of America's heart as it opened in the mid-1800's.
What a rare gift you have - to take us so quickly from the beasts of New York's mid-century concrete jungle (Being Observed in Lesser Than) to the struggle of nature and the rising robber-baron mindset of a century earlier - and both with such grace.
Brava!
What a rare gift you have - to take us so quickly from the beasts of New York's mid-century concrete jungle (Being Observed in Lesser Than) to the struggle of nature and the rising robber-baron mindset of a century earlier - and both with such grace.
Brava!
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Oh my goodness, Tommy, I’ve returned to my Emerson entry to see if any last-minute tweaks are needed now that the comp will be closing in just a few hours... and here your wonderful comment sits waiting for me still!
I can’t ever thank you enough for how much you appreciate the way I may turn a phrase. And how you express the transitions of my two entries by a century, gave me pause to meditate on how that journey was for me.
Humble thanks, dear love.
I can’t ever thank you enough for how much you appreciate the way I may turn a phrase. And how you express the transitions of my two entries by a century, gave me pause to meditate on how that journey was for me.
Humble thanks, dear love.
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Anonymous
8th Mar 2019 4:49pm
Jadey, this is a phenomenal piece ov art... it's like watching furrows being dug, seeded, tended harvested... i can see the vista change & grow...
simply bloody amazing
xo
simply bloody amazing
xo
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Dearest Katja, I’m humbled & honored by your thoughts as you expressed the vision that my piece manifested before your mind’s eye. Thank you for the gift of your words and the RL add.
Tiger xo
Tiger xo