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Oblation
on the ledge,
the edge of
loneliness
You let me fall. . .
into Your eyes
gasping for air
I struggled to
keep afloat
my conscious
love for You.
desperately, though,
I wanted to free
myself of my need
for companionship.
You were kind
You were intoxicating
and I think You held
more common sense
when You left me
for life
and living.
We are both now Free.
Published 4th Mar 2019
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4th Mar 2019 9:39pm
4th Mar 2019 9:42pm
for me,
it is
many things
many memories
and deep loves in my past and present.
thank You, Brenda for the read and kindness
it is
many things
many memories
and deep loves in my past and present.
thank You, Brenda for the read and kindness
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
4th Mar 2019 10:30pm
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4th Mar 2019 10:32pm
much appreciative for You sharing with me
and for dropping by to peruse
thank You
and for dropping by to peruse
thank You
4th Mar 2019 10:38pm
Though I feel you speak of final departing I think I can relate ... lovely write .. Bless and deep love ...
4th Mar 2019 10:42pm
no finality, here
only an end to separate means
I think perhaps, only the Christian exes might view this as an end, a final depart.
Love that You read and shared Your read, though!
only an end to separate means
I think perhaps, only the Christian exes might view this as an end, a final depart.
Love that You read and shared Your read, though!
4th Mar 2019 10:55pm
Your words do touch me even if in slightly different ways than meant at times ... Bless and love ..
4th Mar 2019 10:58pm
4th Mar 2019 11:05pm
4th Mar 2019 11:07pm
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4th Mar 2019 10:47pm
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4th Mar 2019 10:53pm
kind of..........right?
I was not trying to make it so
but it just came out this way
I blame the word < loneliness > on the turn to the sad
I was not trying to make it so
but it just came out this way
I blame the word < loneliness > on the turn to the sad
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
5th Mar 2019 10:13am
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5th Mar 2019 3:34pm
5th Mar 2019 9:24pm
Comes a time one has to leave off taking the cow by the nipple and take the bull by the horn!
I am lost in the depth of this eloquent river. It is stark but honest.
Yet, it yields to receive as much as to give -- that elusive freedom.
Beautiful.
I am lost in the depth of this eloquent river. It is stark but honest.
Yet, it yields to receive as much as to give -- that elusive freedom.
Beautiful.
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