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Penitential Austerity
I want You to know
ggoddam You are so
so incredible and
we both know. . .
I long to go
to flee
be free
unchained soul
You are just so
so Beautiful
and me so full
of it and fuel
of unworthy
an indolent view
I longed to be You
like You
but uncontrolled
I am shit –
a muddied soul
and
on my knees
amidst a river’s
flow
I pray for forgiveness
and willingly
I let You go
I await the Grim Reaper’s
whetted scythe
for he knows
I don’t belong………….
i am here by celestial
error
Published 5th Mar 2019
Author's Note
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k3_RU30tEIE
the way I’m feeling this night……….
the way I’m feeling this night……….
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5th Mar 2019 4:52am
5th Mar 2019 4:57am
thank You, Beautiful Sister
i actually wish I had a human soul to hug
even a Ghost hug might suffice.
i actually wish I had a human soul to hug
even a Ghost hug might suffice.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
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5th Mar 2019 5:04am
i'm so sorry, Brother....
if I could have prevented You reading my pain and depression I would have but this Deep doesn't have the controls.
I don't want anyone to feel my sad
just now.....
I had to get a 2nd hand towel.
You know me (and us) sometimes the tears just don't fucking stop......
if I could have prevented You reading my pain and depression I would have but this Deep doesn't have the controls.
I don't want anyone to feel my sad
just now.....
I had to get a 2nd hand towel.
You know me (and us) sometimes the tears just don't fucking stop......
5th Mar 2019 5:22am
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5th Mar 2019 3:37pm
it's some sad that has collected over the years
appreciate
the compassion and read
appreciate
the compassion and read
5th Mar 2019 9:28pm
I know that game well myself. It's a rough road, I know..wishing you peace
this in depth'ly made me breathless ,
and it says everything without needed explanation
"i am here by celestial error "..
..am truly touched inside
I can't even say
and it says everything without needed explanation
"i am here by celestial error "..
..am truly touched inside
I can't even say
6th Mar 2019 5:48pm
I am truly sorry You felt this
sad (of mine)
but happy that You Feel
and happy I could touch You, within
sad (of mine)
but happy that You Feel
and happy I could touch You, within
8th Mar 2019 7:08am
Tallen,
You are one of 2 poets on here that I look forward to the read. Without a doubt if you are a" celestial error", then we have the same creator. To me, your poetry is a celestial experience.
You are one of 2 poets on here that I look forward to the read. Without a doubt if you are a" celestial error", then we have the same creator. To me, your poetry is a celestial experience.
8th Mar 2019 7:24am
