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TEA TIME
I am reading you
and words build up inside me,
longing to be spilled
You are reading me
and boiling water whistles—
your thoughts sublimate
We pore over each
other and then we pour our-
selves into teacups
You offer honey,
I supply the cream; tea time
with you is a dream
and words build up inside me,
longing to be spilled
You are reading me
and boiling water whistles—
your thoughts sublimate
We pore over each
other and then we pour our-
selves into teacups
You offer honey,
I supply the cream; tea time
with you is a dream
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3rd Mar 2019 10:36pm
Wow ... love this ... I was savoring some licorice tea (no joke) ... when your poem popped up ... God I love poetry ...
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3rd Mar 2019 10:38pm
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Omg..this is an epic piece. Im in love with the yummy metaphors!! Mmm..to 🥛& 🍯
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3rd Mar 2019 10:40pm
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3rd Mar 2019 10:49pm
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3rd Mar 2019 10:48pm
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3rd Mar 2019 10:58pm
Keep it coming, Sky_dancer, fluffer of my prodigious quill :-)
(but in all seriousness, heartfelt appreciation)
(but in all seriousness, heartfelt appreciation)
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4th Mar 2019 00:12am
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4th Mar 2019 00:28am
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4th Mar 2019 00:35am
Warmed cheeks and very happy to be an inspiration. Thank you! Incidentally I have found myself saying your username outloud sometimes. It's just so fun to say.
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4th Mar 2019 00:37am
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4th Mar 2019 00:43am
yelluw which I pronounce yelloo.
question- having just read the definition of quaquaversal, would it apply to the breast of a woman lying on her back? Or perhaps the buttock of a man lying on his stomach? So many things in life it turns out may indeed be quaquaversal...
question- having just read the definition of quaquaversal, would it apply to the breast of a woman lying on her back? Or perhaps the buttock of a man lying on his stomach? So many things in life it turns out may indeed be quaquaversal...
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4th Mar 2019 00:50am
yes... i often think of a mountain and lava running down it... anything that moves from center and everywhere outwards...
so i can imagine fingers traveling quaquaversal- starting from the nipple, smoothing and kneading as they slowly slope.
so i can imagine fingers traveling quaquaversal- starting from the nipple, smoothing and kneading as they slowly slope.
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4th Mar 2019 00:54am
Or a droplet, momentarily seated at the nipple, waiting to be warmed by body heat before deciding how to change the body map with a new and milky rivulet in any direction
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4th Mar 2019 4:41am
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