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2/23/19

I blast into you-
impossibly gentle
elemental force

JACUZZI JET POEM

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 24th Feb 2019

#senryu #sensual #technology #water

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Re. 2/23/19

24th Feb 2019 4:09am

made me laugh out loud.

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24th Feb 2019 4:19am

this makes me happy

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Re. 2/23/19

1st Mar 2019 2:15pm

Very nice

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