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Preying Mantis

thrust me into madness
safety can't be guaranteed
I might eat your head

Written by brokentitanium

(k.)

Published 23rd Feb 2019

#lust

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Re. Preying Mantis

Solomon_Song

23rd Feb 2019 7:57am

This is straight up sex asked for, no passionate holds barred. Stylistically, not quite a perfect haiku - the syllable count of the successive lines ideally is five, seven, five.

I posted a (longer) poem Praying Mantis on this site in 2016, welcome to read this.