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Submissive Babygirl
Tie me to the bed
Pin me to the wall
Spank me hard
Force me on my knees
Fuck me hard
Fuck me deep
Never stop
Make me scream
Rip me to shreds
Tear me apart
Bite my neck
Make me drip
Torture me with pleasure
GO to the extremes
Bend me over
Fuck me faster
Fill me until I gush
Fuck me so hard I can’t think straight
Beat my pussy make it red
Until your name is all I scream
Can’t walk straight or even leave the bed
You know you love when I give you head
Pin me to the wall
Spank me hard
Force me on my knees
Fuck me hard
Fuck me deep
Never stop
Make me scream
Rip me to shreds
Tear me apart
Bite my neck
Make me drip
Torture me with pleasure
GO to the extremes
Bend me over
Fuck me faster
Fill me until I gush
Fuck me so hard I can’t think straight
Beat my pussy make it red
Until your name is all I scream
Can’t walk straight or even leave the bed
You know you love when I give you head
Published 22nd Feb 2019
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25th Feb 2019 11:54pm
'You know you love when I give you head'
I shouldn't be reading this really, lol but what the hell, huh?
I was thinking, an even more powerful ending line might be:
'You know you love when I have bled' just to extend the notion that your lover was so ferocious he caused you injury.
I feel uncomfortable saying it but this write feels void of any soft, sensuous romance, lol. It's manic & is, of course, another type of expression. It's like the devil got ahold of you.
I shouldn't be reading this really, lol but what the hell, huh?
I was thinking, an even more powerful ending line might be:
'You know you love when I have bled' just to extend the notion that your lover was so ferocious he caused you injury.
I feel uncomfortable saying it but this write feels void of any soft, sensuous romance, lol. It's manic & is, of course, another type of expression. It's like the devil got ahold of you.
7th Mar 2019 8:27pm
Get cadence with this ... relentless ... can feel it build with each line ... bravo my poetess ...
7th Mar 2019 8:28pm
