Erotica

''of spliced seams
from which semen falls
runs thru’ my hair ''

now that some vivid imagery Jade

very sexy vibe...

Thank you so very much, Naajir... I adore early mornings.

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Cig then?  Bless and love ...

In your dreams?


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Simply where your journey took me ... Bless and love ..

Ah yes, makes sense, thank you. The question mark is what gave me pause.


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ahh was simply looking for confirmation if I got the moment right ... to me the next thing after would be something such ... Bless and love ...

‘Twas most observant of you, good sir.


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Excellent example of how perspective and word choice separates porn from erotica.

Most gracious thanks, dear sister of the Pen, to appreciate and full embrace the difference. Always delighted by your visits.


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A scene painted masterfully in few words. I enjoyed this piece.

Thank you so much, Rjm, for your kind receive and express, and for the inclusion of the piece in a place of honor.


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Your diction always paints such vivid imagery “the breach of parting breakers....”

My gracious thanks to you, Poet Mel, for sharing such thoughts of support and appreciation.


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Beautiful erotica ... love the short lines ... crisp line breaks ... creates such a beautiful flow ... bravo my poetess ...

Aah, my lovely Lil’D, it’s so nice to have you visiting, for a read and to honor me with your thoughts... and the inclusion on your Reading List. I hope all has been going well for you, with my thanks, dear sister.


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Yes... Yes... Yes!

The breach
of parting breakers
as its phase exudes

all tapered reach
thru’ surging acres’
rush precludes

mmmmmmmm- rush precludes!

Yes... Yes... Yes...

Oh my dear, try not to stifle your feelings.  Don’t hold back...


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what a beautifully sublime piece, Jade-Pandora.  Thank you.

Merci monsieur le poète.

Et bienvenue dans les Deep Underground.


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Why thank you most graciously, Danny, and delighted.