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locomotion
Written by
cabcool
Published 13th Feb 2019
Author's Note
Copy and paste link into your browser for visual poem:
http://mydo.cx/Yjk4YTNm
http://mydo.cx/Yjk4YTNm
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. locomotion
13th Feb 2019 6:41pm
The browser link gig worked this time and way better than enlarging (what I did yesterday) as it's clearer (no pixelation).
Enjoyed the spill
Enjoyed the spill
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Re: Re. locomotion
13th Feb 2019 7:35pm
Thanks, Tallen. Your feedback has been helpful to me in indicating to readers how to access the linked doc.
Re. locomotion
13th Feb 2019 6:58pm
the picture fits so well, like a red headlight, or a bloody gear...
and then the words, abstract but evokes the pistons of a sad train..
made it alive even though it seems to appear to be in a depression.
<3
and then the words, abstract but evokes the pistons of a sad train..
made it alive even though it seems to appear to be in a depression.
<3
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Re: Re. locomotion
13th Feb 2019 7:39pm
Wow, I like your assessment, yelluw_always!
I didn't even think of headlight or gear, but wheel and spokes.
You read me well.
Thank you.
I didn't even think of headlight or gear, but wheel and spokes.
You read me well.
Thank you.
Re. locomotion
13th Feb 2019 10:32pm
Re: Re. locomotion
Thanks, Harry. I was just having fun with the pen and the more I jived, the more pliant it became. I appreciate your stopping by.