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Haze and Underweigh
Overcast or undermined
So many facets to find
And fifty shades at least
Pelts of primal beasts
Ambivalence and Goose
Ambergris and grease
Cityscape camouflage
Commonplace clouds of smog
Asphalt and cetacean skin
You scale for fische and fish alike
A string for fin and wing
Slate or opinion unavailing
Colorless neutrality and yet
Candlesmoke and Yankee attire
Show emotions you inspire
Why so sad?
At least you're not Blue.
So many facets to find
And fifty shades at least
Pelts of primal beasts
Ambivalence and Goose
Ambergris and grease
Cityscape camouflage
Commonplace clouds of smog
Asphalt and cetacean skin
You scale for fische and fish alike
A string for fin and wing
Slate or opinion unavailing
Colorless neutrality and yet
Candlesmoke and Yankee attire
Show emotions you inspire
Why so sad?
At least you're not Blue.
Published 13th Feb 2019
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13th Feb 2019 8:28pm
I really enjoyed this. You and Haley's writing resembles to a degree, especially metaphorically.
14th Feb 2019 1:28am
14th Feb 2019 1:30am
4th Mar 2019 8:45am
Just love how creative you are with...I also like rhyme...and its unique the way you write, which is how people know you as a poet:)
4th Mar 2019 10:04am
Thanks for kind comments. Who knew a poem about gray could be well received?
