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Joker
This joker was once wild
Taking a multitude of risks
Some of them ill advised
And subject to my arrest
As for women, they were scarce
Most of them had common sense
A few quick fucks and they were gone
And only one of them stayed on
I have a daughter, far away
Her silence a mystery
She doubtless knows I'm but a clown
Yet not fit for my grandkids
But that cliché, "clean up my act"
Really does now apply
I may come close to cleanliness
I sure as hell will try.
Taking a multitude of risks
Some of them ill advised
And subject to my arrest
As for women, they were scarce
Most of them had common sense
A few quick fucks and they were gone
And only one of them stayed on
I have a daughter, far away
Her silence a mystery
She doubtless knows I'm but a clown
Yet not fit for my grandkids
But that cliché, "clean up my act"
Really does now apply
I may come close to cleanliness
I sure as hell will try.
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Re: Re. Joker
11th Feb 2019 9:12pm
Re. Joker
11th Feb 2019 9:00pm
dearest Thomas I understand this write
having a past too that is less than respectable...
sigh great write your resolve is beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
having a past too that is less than respectable...
sigh great write your resolve is beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. Joker
13th Feb 2019 10:13pm
I try not to live in the past. I think it was a learning experience for us both, though. I suspect you have your own resolve, Brenda. It shows in much of your work.
Re. Joker
12th Feb 2019 8:32am
Inspiring to hear how you have changed your life around, but saddening to see that perhaps it is too late for others. I hope you still have time to make amends.
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14th Feb 2019 00:55am
Re. Joker
12th Feb 2019 11:22pm
We all have those things we must put past us. Some never do. I'm glad you owned it & did, esp to put it into ink. Courageous write!!
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Re: Re. Joker
14th Feb 2019 00:58am
Thank you Pandora, from a man who is not typically known for heroism or courage. Just an ordinary guy, but I have my moments.
Re: Re. Joker
14th Feb 2019 2:34am
Even ordinary guys have courage, silly crowfly!! It comes from something as simple as recognizing and changing our actions & owning our story with others.;)
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Re. Joker
14th Feb 2019 9:35pm
This is well understood. Mistakes made are hard to fix but knowing not to repeat them is a start. I learned that a bit late, c'est ce que c'est.
Glad you see and want to make a change.
Glad you see and want to make a change.
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19th Feb 2019 11:12pm
Re. Joker
19th Feb 2019 9:28pm
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19th Feb 2019 11:15pm
I tried to make this one as personal as possible, at least in verse. Thank you for your belief in me! It instills some confidence...